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I sit all alone
Waiting for you to come home
I forget how long it has been
I know I cannot win
Time slowly degrades me
I wait to be free
I am so alone
Waiting for you to come home
Time keeps slipping by
I am starting to think I can fly
Waiting for the bliss
That comes from that wonderful kiss
I look out the window
and I see that river flow
Can I fly?
or is it my destiny to die
I'm sick of waiting all alone
waiting for you to come home
I step up to that window sill
And I take the spill
I fall into the river
And I get that ice cold shiver
I now know that I cannot fly
It is my destiny to die
Further and futher i go
down that ice cold river flow
but wait! I see a faint glow
could it be your beautiful face
to save me by your wonderful grace
in the river you reach
it is your hand that I beseach
you pull me up and out
and I kiss you hard and without a doubt
I am happy for I'm no longer alone
for you have finally come home
Posted by zypvashna on 2008-02-05 21:12:19 | Rating: | Views: 11088


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Posted by
chatelain
on 2008-02-05 21:14:34
 
oh hunny is that the poem you wrote me a few weeks ago. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH don't stop writing.
 
 

Posted by
eeerm
on 2008-02-06 07:39:32
 
Beautiful :)
 
 

Posted by
fatima
on 2008-02-06 16:19:28
 
i knoe its hard to let go of someone you love!but keep your head up and one day he'll want you more than you wanted him and over a period of time your love for him will fade .........=]
 
 

Posted by
storme
on 2008-02-06 16:22:09
 
thats a really sad poem, but like i say if it was sposed to feel good they wouldnt call it a crush
 
 

Posted by
zypvashna
on 2008-02-06 16:30:10
 
actually its about how my wife is the sunshine that keeps me going on days when i feel sad.
 
 

Posted by
greensky
on 2008-02-06 23:53:09
 
Much feeling and thought I sense there
Lovely poem
Take care
 
 

Posted by
smileyjess
on 2008-02-13 21:32:15
 
OMG! I luv this poem! I wish someone would write one for me!
 
 

Posted by
necronomincon
on 2008-02-26 09:46:19
 
this poem is so heartfelt,excellent
 
 

Posted by
alysha
on 2008-03-08 23:34:04
 
wow, that is seriously deep. i love it. i don't know you, but i can tell you are a really good writer.
i can't believe you have the most viewed blog EVER on thoughts!
i can't even get on 24 hour.

 
 

Posted by
harriboy
on 2008-05-01 20:10:16
 
Amazing
 
 

Posted by
incense
on 2008-05-02 10:08:44
 
Beautiful poem :)
 
 


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