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HER PAST on 2008-04-28 04:33:23 |
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the wonderful thing about poems is that they're bound to resonate with someone. you may not, but i like this one a lot.
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Nightwish - While Your Lips Are Still Red on 2008-04-28 04:22:29 |
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this is pretty. i like "dark hair for catching the wind."
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more goo on 2008-04-28 00:24:13 |
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you're a really good writer. i can't help but get hooked. so i have to wonder, is all this true??? it sounds like fiction.
either way, i'm waiting for the next blog.
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT???
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Stage. on 2008-04-27 23:52:21 |
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i love this.
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Him on 2008-04-26 03:45:40 |
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this is very good. the last sentence is particularly powerful.
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Just My luck on 2008-04-26 03:38:21 |
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No way! How did the mirror explode? That's too wild.
Anyway, I especially like the bit about the cats. It's a grand image. So are bits of glass reflecting light like diamonds. And a prima ballerina moving delicately over a fractured path.
I don't know what you were going for but it reminds me of having too many choices that are all going the wrong way anyway.
Either way, it's great!
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Changes.. on 2008-04-26 03:33:06 |
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This is beautifully written. Each sentence bleeds your love for your friend.
I don't think you're being selfish, knowing that drugs and bad decisions have ripped so much of your friend from you. I think you just know how much he could have been by now.
"Maybe the fact that i am getting older and more fearful of age that seeing him age scares me" is really brave of you to face. The very fact that you recognize that as a possibility shows that you have a really balanced and strong character. That's the perfect type of support your friend needs.
Just don't let it wear you down...
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Tissue? on 2008-04-24 00:42:56 |
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this is wonderful! i feel affirmed as a blogger. =) and i completely relate.
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adsadasdad on 2008-04-22 00:33:51 |
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this is awesome
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