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be nice. this is my first gut-feeling poem in a long time. please dont hurt my creation- its not good for any of us.
hearts throbbing...
lungs acheing...
chests burning..
feelings so strong
swirl around me
a place so dark
harbors my soul
my eyes search
for the unseen light
Out of the darkness
someone is there
feathery angels wings
make me feel protected
dormant feelings begin to swirl
embracing me...
thanks for reading. tell me if u think its good. *looks around*
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why would u think somebody would hurt this? yes, if this was crap then you should have been afraid! :P
BUT THIS IS F***IN AMAZING!!! WOW! really.... WOW!!!
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-18 23:25:43
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Wow. I love this poem. This is a great poem.
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Posted by Kaykay200
on 2008-06-21 20:14:25
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Lovely. Very nice!!!
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Posted by HardThinker
on 2008-06-22 08:07:19
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Looks like we have the same idea. Your's is good too.
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Posted by JadeDragonair
on 2008-07-01 22:43:08
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