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Can't

Cant breath
in the night
Cant face
myself
Cant conquer
my fears
Cant smile
without lieing
Cant cry
without dieing
Cant tell
What would the nieghbors say?
Cant fly
my wings are shattered
Cant try
sick, twisted feelings paints every road
Cant feel
hope budding from the black
Cant talk..
too many delicate chances
Cant change
the air is suffocating
Cant see
someone there
Cant swim
up through the foggy surface
Cant get
out of this smothering cloud
Cant escape
my rigid nightmares
Cant touch
the inviting bottle
Cant pull
the blessed trigger
Cant cut
into heavenly crimson - deeper, deeper
Cant stop
myself from believing that happiness

is just a faded

Illusion...

Posted by xmidnightxwingsx on 2008-11-14 20:11:55 | Rating:

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Hmm....this was beautiful. Very true to almost every person in this world, very true to me. Thanks for posting! I loved it! You've got a talent here, and it's obvious that you feel things more passionatley and with more emotion than normal people, and that gives you this talent! Keep writing~

Posted by xxuglyducklingxx on 2008-11-15 10:03:52

Nicely done:)

Posted by jloyola on 2008-11-15 14:03:31

whoa i love it i really do...i haven't been able to write lately but thats like what im going through right now...hope things are going okay...i love reading your blogs...HUGS

Posted by lilD16 on 2008-11-15 14:35:36

xxuglyducklingxx - thanks for stopping by. i love when people comment

JLOyola - thank you

letty - thanks..yeah doesnt it suck. everythings okay for the most part. :P

Posted by xmidnightxwingsx on 2008-11-15 14:54:00

Hey this was excellent... Glad to read your work...

Cant pull
the blessed trigger
Cant cut
into heavenly crimson - deeper, deeper

Man that says sooooo much to soooo many!

E

Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2008-11-17 16:26:33