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my heart crys for the atention of another
as my blood runs cold
only love can warm the casum that has become my sole
a empty whole where love should go
where it has gone nobody knows
a dark temtation runs through the veins as i see those who are to blame
the preppy luts show there gold to those whos who should be mine
as i waite like a panther on the prowl i know the hunnter will one day be the hunnted
it is only a matter of time till my prey comes to me
then it is the time to pounce .
what do you think this is my first time and am interrested in what you think
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Posted by werebait on 2008-01-18 19:18:39 | Rating: | Views: 85
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wow nice i really like its deep nice
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Posted by deepman
on 2008-01-18 22:09:55
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It's really nice. I like it allot. I have felt somewhat like that before. Keep writing!!!
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Posted by Fancie
on 2008-01-23 19:18:05
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