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When does Cinderella get to Dance?
when do I get my turn?
and you can call me selfish.
The house, the kids, the dogs and work
when do I get my dance in?

I am happy, dont get me wrong,
the things I need are in place
but I want someone to smile at me
when I see their face

ahand to hold, a head on my chest
a lover to share my dreams.
When do I get my dance?
Never. It seems to me.

Am I destined to be alone?
How can this be?
I know that out there in this big old world
is someone made for me.

So sure tonight I'm feeling down
and maybe I've missed my chance
but trust me when I tell you friend
Cinderella will get to dance.





Many of us feel this way. Sure we have a life. The kids to tend and home repairs and work and all the things that go with it, but we do need more. We need that something that only a lover can give us, and as bad as it may sound we need that to make our lives "feel" whole. We struggle on, but inside we do miss that, and on some level you all know I write the truth.
Posted by tonyrayhutchison on 2008-05-01 15:12:38 | Rating: | Views: 149


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Posted by
SubTomato
on 2008-05-01 15:15:35
 
Great and insightful entry.
 
 

Posted by
Meredith
on 2008-05-01 15:45:19
 
You do write the truth. I, too, want my turn.
 
 

Posted by
dawnmarie
on 2008-05-01 16:12:08
 
Very True! I think for the most part, we just wish to find something different, feel needed, appreciated, loved and moreover wanted. We tend to forget in the day in day out world we live in. Perchance to dream that someone is wanting and waiting passionately for you alone.
 
 

Posted by
EasyToSay
on 2008-05-01 17:05:11
 
Tony that again was really great.

You say it is such a nice way .. please don't stop.

While I go into full rant mode!! :)

Maybe I should try your approach ... less white coats will appear *LOL*
 
 

Posted by
missmarie
on 2008-05-01 17:41:26
 
Poor old cinders, i'm sure she will get to dance one day x
 
 

Posted by
ColoradoDreamin
on 2008-05-01 19:22:10
 
No truer words were ever spoken. You have a way of expressing the thoughts and feelings that live within my heart. Peace.
 
 

Posted by
spiritualcoma
on 2008-05-01 19:32:20
 
good poem and very true, but I need dance lesson first!
 
 

Posted by
Hollis
on 2008-05-01 19:41:04
 
I am in agreement with all the comments...You will have to save a dance for me....
 
 

Posted by
angelwings
on 2008-05-02 02:17:35
 
WOW...amazing post!
 
 

Posted by
CynicalSweetheart
on 2008-05-02 13:58:17
 
People live their whole lives waiting for something to happen... Life does not believe you are entitled to anything. There is no "take a number" system in life. Your number will not come up an ordered fashion, without others pushing in front of you who are more assertive or have less responsibilities. (Forgive me for sounding a bit Fight Club).

Basically my advise is you gotta go out and fight for what you want. Look for it. Latch on. But you can't truly be free to pursue exactly what you want unless you're a sociopath who will go to any lengths as long as they don't believe there will be any negative consequences for themselves. Restraint is a good thing.

Sad but cute poem.
 
 


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