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two souls united in loves divide.
his heart broken, hers captive of time.
two lovers embrace and all of heaven sings,
for the love that two lost souls bring.
two hearts divided by circumstance of life
try to deny what they both know is right.
two souls united in loves divide
held captive by the other for all time.
Aye, but he is broken, and she has her time
he is haunted, and she has her fears
he is pleading "lets make this together"
and she tells him "no" eyes full of tears.
And still they are drawn,
like tides to the shore
two souls united
for evermore.
There are secrets hiddin within this rhyme that normaly I wouldn't reveal. It was written for Molly (shut up and deal with it, I love that woman), and I know she always see's the picture I write beneath, but I read two heartbreaking blogs today and want to share a secret or two with you guys.
I fell in love with Molly's heart expressed through her poems, and her posts. I loved her fire ,and her passion. I was captivated by her heartache, and her willingness to suffer for what she knew to be love. And everyday I fall in love with her a little more.
Molly has a long standing boyfriend who she has had some...... problems(?) with and she found comfort in me. I had just come off a very devastating breakup when I met her here, and not really meaning to I found what it was I was hurting so much to have.
She left her fella, and then came to see me, and my God she is beautiful, takes my breath away just thinking about it. But alas (did I just write alas?), time won out and she found herself missing him. It is what it is, and I regret nothing of what has become of our two souls united. She is my muse, my hearts inspiration. and I hope I am her shoulder, and maybe her streangth. I wanted to point that out, my "broken" as refered to in this poem was the heartbreak, and her "captive of time" was do to her relationship. So now that we see some of the secrets, let me get to the point.
Whiteknight and KP's post's broke my heart. I understand what it is that (especialy WK) they are going through, or at least the part they let all of us read. And I'm not offering any "sage" advice, not trying to tell either one of you that "it will get better with time". I just want you to know that I'll be praying for you both, that you both find peace and happiness, and the love you want and deserve. |
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Posted by tonyrayhutchison on 2008-06-29 19:14:57 | Rating: | Views: 137
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Omj thats really ddep and really good too!!
-Tay
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Posted by Supporttheflocktw...
on 2008-06-29 19:37:25
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I guess I was owed a good cry. absolutely beautiful tony. you are my shoulder, my rock, and my strength. "two hearts divided by circumstance of life"--that one hit me and I was done for after that. Your words after were wondeful.....grrrrr ;)
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Posted by Katydids_and_daisies
on 2008-06-29 20:22:40
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btw I read it all 3 times before I could find words to say...
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Posted by Katydids_and_daisies
on 2008-06-29 20:23:21
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Beautifully expressed Tony.
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Posted by country_girl
on 2008-06-29 22:26:29
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Tony, well written as always.
You know I love both you and Molly ... no matter what.... just be gentle with each other, both deserve the best.
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Posted by EasyToSay
on 2008-06-29 22:45:45
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Thanks guy
I thank everyone for all prayers given because I asked and given because they want to pray. I get down on faith sometimes but maybe....
Problem is when you make a bad situation worse and I may have done that, do not make that mistake
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Posted by whiteknight
on 2008-06-30 07:12:37
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beautiful hun :]
very deep
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Posted by nikkiekardos
on 2008-06-30 10:30:41
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Well I think it's beautifully expressed.
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Posted by anotherdaze
on 2008-06-30 11:39:16
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that was awsome. i like the part about the tides. it was cool the way you put it.
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Posted by Angel_Crank
on 2008-06-30 15:25:56
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very beautifully expressed, Tony. I hope both of you find happiness eventually...
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Posted by angelwings
on 2008-07-01 03:15:37
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