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there's a ghost in this house
there's a ghost in this house
my mind is playing games
you left me long ago
but I still feel the pain.
I still smell your perfume
I still taste your kiss
there's a ghost in this house
and I cant live like this.

so I listen to the radio
and sing with every song I know.
Still your laughter is all I hear
My heart pours out with every tear
I'd swear you walk these rooms at night
while I dream of holding you tight,
but when morning breaks you're not here
I'm still alone with your memory to bear

there's a ghost in this house
my mind is playing games
you left me long ago
but I still feel the pain.
I still smell your perfume
I still taste your kiss
there's a ghost in this house
and I cant live like this.

Its done, I've made up my mind
I've wasted to much time
laying around this house
feeling sorry for myself
I'm getting out of this place
look into a new loves face
gonna find some one to hold me
someone to fill this void
and tomorrow when I wake up
maybe you wont be here any more.



Just got bored and thought I'd shoot something out. Meredith got me thinking about ghosts, or memories if you will, and then I just wrote this. I'm not saying its for her, its just her "Brian" is kinda like a ghost, and then my head just spun all this other stuff out. Whatever. Have a good night all.
Posted by tonyrayhutchison on 2008-05-05 22:33:36 | Rating: | Views: 124


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Posted by
spiritualcoma
on 2008-05-06 01:18:03
 
lol spill it out friend, or whatever. another great one though, definately gets the stars.
 
 

Posted by
angelwings
on 2008-05-06 01:53:02
 
This is how you write when you're bored??? Tony, my friend, you need to be bored more often in that case!!! 5 stars for you, this was BRILLIANT!!! you're a genius...
 
 

Posted by
missmarie
on 2008-05-06 09:33:55
 
Very creative honey xx
 
 

Posted by
erica3
on 2008-05-06 09:48:16
 
5 stars for tony for another really great post. :)
 
 

Posted by
tonyrayhutchison
on 2008-05-06 10:16:12
 
I had the idea for "Ghost in this house" for years. I've worked on it a couple times and never liked it. I dont like this one much either. IDK, guess we're never done writting, I'm my own worst critic
 
 

Posted by
prelude2it
on 2008-05-06 13:06:12
 
That was really good. I'm sure Meredith will like it too.
 
 

Posted by
ColoradoDreamin
on 2008-05-06 19:38:07
 
Another 5 Star Post ....Seems to be a lot of ghosts around today. One was lurking around my house (mind) today as well. Time to call ghostbusters and get on with life. Tony Ray once again you have put words to the thoughts and feelings in my heart. Bless You.
 
 

Posted by
Hollis
on 2008-05-07 10:32:24
 
That is how I feel when I go to my mom and dad's house. As it sits empty since dad died...I remember all the things we use to do there and can still smell moom and dad too. It is kinda creepy though.
 
 

Posted by
dreampower
on 2008-05-09 20:25:58
 
I love this one Tony...says what you're thinking....those type of ghosts are everywhere....don't you think??? S
 
 


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