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Sun sets on waters edge
river gently sighs.
Crickets play an endless song
welcoming in the night.
Supper smells come wafting by
on a breeze thats gently blowing
childrens laughter over heard
while mothers hang their clothing.
lovers holding hands in the park
strolling ever so slow
knowing that this spring sunset
is theres and theres alone.
I've spent the day with my boywonder, and the weather was fantastic! So yesterday I stumbled, today he helped me up. I hope all the world found a smile in a childs face today, it may very well be the cure for all ills.
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Smiles of a child, such a ray of sunshine right there .... :)
Have a great rest of your week-end
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Posted by EasyToSay
on 2008-05-03 20:15:17
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wonderful poem tony, hope the rest of the weekend is as great.
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Posted by spiritualcoma
on 2008-05-03 20:56:15
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Beautiful poem. The laughter of a child can bring sunshine and smiles to even the worst day. I love the sound of crickets on a warm Summer evening. It's makes me feel that all is well with the universe. Peace.
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Posted by ColoradoDreamin
on 2008-05-03 21:30:15
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Nice, nice, nice,
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Posted by lampoil
on 2008-05-03 22:40:05
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A tortured soul with a poet's heart. I'm glad you found some peace today. And I'm glad you shared it with us. Thanks, Tony
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Posted by BootLady
on 2008-05-03 23:49:41
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hey guys, thanks for the comments. boywonder is a Godsend. when his momma and I divorced knowing that she gave me him kept me from being to miserable over it. the little dude is the greatest.
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Posted by tonyrayhutchison
on 2008-05-03 23:51:21
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GREAT to see the happiness in that post :D
Nice one..Loved the last stanza the best
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Posted by angelwings
on 2008-05-04 05:17:47
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This is lovely Tony, you get better all the time, gave me a little smile :)
love ya x
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Posted by missmarie
on 2008-05-04 16:10:12
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Great poem...kids are great...aren't they???
S
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Posted by dreampower
on 2008-05-04 19:46:14
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wow, i after reading this one i just set here thinking... i could see wht u was thinking
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Posted by TDELL
on 2008-06-09 09:27:53
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