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someone give this a title please
I touch your face
I taste your kiss
I'm lost in your arms
in utter bliss
I smell your hair
and look into your eyes
two secret windows
of heavens sky.
Then I awake
my God it was a dream!
if I close my eyes
maybe you'll come back to me
but no it isn't real
you're still far away.
how long must I wake
crying everyday?!



I hurt so bad, this doesn't make sense. I swear to God I've never loved some one like this.
Why cant I shake this, why wont it go away. I cant keep livin like this every single day.

see, I just ramble. pour it out. I'm a man for God's sake! I got to get a grip on this! She doesn't love me, okay like thats never happend before?! people stop loving each other, this aint nothing new, hell its not like I've never been dumped, but I dont want to screw her sister (the old way of getting over a breakup) I really hurt here. I cant fix this, and I really want to just eat something. Sorry guys, please read some of my other work, it is alot better than this.
Posted by tonyrayhutchison on 2008-04-18 22:06:55 | Rating: | Views: 112


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Posted by
spiritualcoma
on 2008-04-18 22:39:31
 
Can't really offer a title.. very uncanny that I just posted on the same topic. Can snag my title if you want.
BTW, another well written one.
 
 

Posted by
tonyrayhutchison
on 2008-04-18 23:31:52
 
thank you coma, and it dont need a title, screw it!;):p
 
 

Posted by
JuanDomingo
on 2008-04-19 04:55:12
 
"Hopingly Hoping"

Yes, Ive been there myself...
Yes, stayed there a while...
Yes, finally moved on...
Yes, I met someone else...
 
 

Posted by
missmarie
on 2008-04-19 09:05:41
 
Personally i think it should be called

"you stupid girl don't you know a good thing when you've got it"

ok its a bit long but this is a great poem Tony, i am sorry you are hurting so bad honey x
big hugs xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
 
 

Posted by
Nutshell
on 2008-04-19 22:42:10
 
Don't want to wake......
 
 

Posted by
tonyrayhutchison
on 2008-04-19 22:57:39
 
missmarie I like yours the best!!! thanks everybody for reading and commenting. dont want to wake is great too!
 
 


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