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had the plot figured
before the story ended
and I still was suprised
I am nothing more than what you see
dont lay the things he did on me
and I talk to you when your not here
in rhynmes and poems and song
and I know that if I knew whats right
then I wouldnt do the wrong
and still I cant figure it all out
the reasons we're apart
and I can see you laying there
next to me in the dark
and its been so long since I've seen your face
but still i know its every line
I cant be still or calm these ghosts
with you always in my mind
and if I could hear just a whisper
but your words arent there
and if I could have just a minute
but you wont meet me here
and so I smoke and take a shot
one more burning drink
and head to bed alone again
to tired to think
but sleep wont come, no not tonight
as often is the case
I'll lay here staring at the dark
and still see your face
To be honest I'm not sure how this came out or why. I'm in no way pressed out or stuck on the way back when stuff. Its been like this all day, just this little ditty's that pour through for no reason. I'm finding it again, that groove, that spot; that whatever it is that lets me do whatever it is I do here. I hope you like it
I'm putting this in Tiff's folder, it seems to fit. I miss her from time to time. But not tonight. Tonight I smile knowing she never knew the me I came to be
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no matter where it came from it's beautiful and I'm glad it came.
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Posted by Katydids_and_daisies
on 2008-08-06 20:33:15
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nice,like your style,seeya around,peace
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Posted by bjm1
on 2008-08-06 21:40:13
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Hey Yours, just a *hug* for you tonight.
xx
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Posted by EasyToSay
on 2008-08-06 21:48:47
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"I'm finding it again, that groove, that spot; that whatever it is that lets me do whatever it is I do here."
You have no idea how much this line made me smile.
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Posted by smileforthecamera
on 2008-08-06 22:32:55
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Tony it's flow was beautifully and felt like every word was in it's perfect place!! Your gifted!
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Posted by anotherdaze
on 2008-08-06 23:08:22
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How sweet I remember having those feelings about someone. I hate it when you just want to talk to someone that you no longer can find or get in touch with. Like my long lost friend Brian who got married and does not even know I have kids now. He was my friend for fifteen years and we dated and that messed our friendship up because his wife could not tollerate knowing that, so basicly your poem brought back memories. Beautiful thoughts. LANA
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Posted by michelle8angels
on 2008-08-07 00:46:31
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You have a really great talent for writing what we all may feel from time to time :)
Beautiful work :)
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Posted by Kaybee
on 2008-08-07 08:49:36
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This is wonderful! I need to find some inner pain to write about, I guess I have been trying to stuff it down too long.....LOL
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Posted by Rajah1116
on 2008-08-07 10:07:13
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Hey bro, excellent rhyme. Glad to see ya climbing back in the saddle once again. Hope I get there soon as well.. forever ride the Thoughts Playboys! hehehe
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Posted by spiritualcoma
on 2008-08-07 12:07:25
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Great job Tony... you really are a very talented writer
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Posted by country_girl
on 2008-08-07 20:40:58
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Every so often old stuff that no longer seves rises to the surface to be washed away. I see your poem as that action of cleansing. All that's left is to tone and moisturise ;)
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Posted by tantrictouch
on 2008-08-23 04:55:12
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not 'seves'... but 'serves'... sorry hun xxtantricxx
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Posted by tantrictouch
on 2008-08-23 04:55:58
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