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Secret Crush 2

I wonder if you'll read this tale
this poem that I spin.
and if you know that its for you,
how would you feel about me then?
Would it scare you that I care
and dream of you like I do,
or would you think that it was sweet
and start crushin' on me too.
We're friends, and that means more to me
then any puppy love
and yet I often dream of how it'd be
just to feel your touch.
So smile when you read these words
and know I'd never try
for wretched fear holds me here
and keeps this secret deep inside

Posted by tonyrayhutchison on 2007-12-28 12:09:05 | Rating: | Views: 149


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Posted by
angel_devil
on 2007-12-28 12:12:14
 
aaawwwwssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


>_< to sweet and cute, yet im clueless
 
 

Posted by
Rajah1116
on 2007-12-28 12:14:59
 
Tony...I see no clues here...come on! How is she gonna figure out its her from this?
 
 

Posted by
missmarie
on 2007-12-28 12:19:17
 
Tony the clues here might help her (though i dont see how) we are still none the wiser!
come on we want clues that are obvious to all xxxx
lovely poem though xxxx
 
 

Posted by
tonyrayhutchison
on 2007-12-28 12:19:22
 
the words will tell her, besides I dont want to spill it out all fast, I want her to read me everyday, and before long she'll just know its her
 
 

Posted by
think_pink
on 2007-12-28 12:28:58
 
I think this is beautiful but how can you love someone you don't even know? You just like what she says on a website.
 
 

Posted by
Rajah1116
on 2007-12-28 12:31:21
 
think_pink...I think words and thoughts are more meaningful than any bar conversation.....
 
 

Posted by
lostandalone
on 2007-12-28 13:06:03
 
Not giving much away are you?
 
 

Posted by
erica3
on 2007-12-28 13:26:02
 
thats how you fall for someone, well a lot of people do. through their conversations.
 
 

Posted by
Whitters
on 2007-12-28 13:43:52
 
You know I'm still trying to figure it out. When I think I know - something else comes into play.
 
 

Posted by
mymidlifecrisis
on 2007-12-30 16:25:35
 
OK, she's on the friends list and likes dogs.... checking back soon! I'll figure it out!!
 
 

Posted by
missmarie
on 2008-01-02 07:01:48
 
i know this is most irrelevant now, but where did mymidlifecrisis get that clue from? no fair, that means everyone figured it out before i did!
*sulks*
only kidding but i do want to know why i missed that clue..no one tells me anything!
 
 

Posted by
bubblydi
on 2008-01-05 12:16:05
 
AHA, You must say more, i think she is trying to pretend to herself that it is not her.xx
 
 

Posted by
missmarie
on 2008-05-24 21:41:44
 
Thanks for opening these up again honey, cheered me up on a gloomy day x
 
 


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