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Our first dance
I've danced this dance a thousand times
though always in my heart.
I never knew how to move
till you were in my arms.
A billion lights above our heads
the clouds below our feet
and all the eyes on every world
watch two lovers meet.
As heaven hosts this dance we share
your head upon my chest
that heart it beats for you my doll
and never will it rest.
This dance will last forever
for its our dance of love.
never to be finished
till the stars fall from above.


I love you doll, I hope he does half as much
Posted by tonyrayhutchison on 2007-12-21 00:30:28 | Rating: | Views: 174


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Posted by
missmarie
on 2007-12-21 05:16:04
 
Tony that is beautiful, maybe you should show her this poem, she's a very lucky lady to inspire such tender words xxx
 
 

Posted by
Rajah1116
on 2007-12-21 09:36:25
 
wow monkey, that's wonderful! I hope she realizes how special you are!
 
 

Posted by
tonyrayhutchison
on 2007-12-21 12:17:16
 
Thanks guys, she's in a wierd place with her man right now, and I don't want to be the reason they breakup, though it looks like he's doing that just fine. She saw it already, and cried. I hope that means it touched her.
 
 

Posted by
mymidlifecrisis
on 2007-12-21 17:10:57
 
will you marry me? LOL!
 
 

Posted by
erica3
on 2007-12-21 21:55:00
 
wow i hope i can find a guy that would be willing to write such an amazing poem like that for me!!! its really great! :)
 
 

Posted by
DifficultSoul
on 2007-12-22 01:35:35
 
Beautiful words.
Love makes us into poets.
 
 

Posted by
MissAnonymous
on 2007-12-24 09:55:18
 
This is very sweet. I need a man like you!
 
 

Posted by
Angel_Crank
on 2008-07-14 15:10:25
 
this is very sweet!
 
 

Posted by
Angel_Crank
on 2008-07-14 15:11:10
 
i'm finally reading some of your old stuff
 
 


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