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two star crossed lovers worlds apart
both broken angels of loves lost
tired and yearning, a moment of chance
they find each other no matter the distance
Lonely, she confesses and he tells her the same
looking, he admits. but no more games.
and time stands still for the lonely hearts
kept lonely for the distance apart
what chance do two lovers have o'er mountains, and streams
when only ever they 've met's been on a screen?
what chance could there ever be,
but still these two lovers dream
by chance on business he found a way
and in a lobby is where it took place.
"You're more than I ever dreamed" he whispers
then bends slowly down to kiss her
two star crossed lovers worlds apart
and with this kiss there love does start.
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oh my tony,
I think I love you.....kidding my friend. That was just beautiful....
not kidding, love you like a little brother, assuming you are younger than I.....smile...
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Posted by Hollis
on 2008-04-30 22:04:14
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beautiful tony, very nice poem.
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Posted by spiritualcoma
on 2008-04-30 22:04:27
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Thanks guys. hollis, I'm 29 (shhh dont tell no one else!) so IDK, but I love you like you're my sis. and coma, DUUUUDDDDE stop changing your name!!!;)
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Posted by tonyrayhutchison
on 2008-04-30 22:07:35
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That was SO nice.
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Posted by Meredith
on 2008-04-30 22:41:37
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Tony, you write so well my friend... very nice :)
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Posted by EasyToSay
on 2008-04-30 22:58:26
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thank you meredith and EasyToSay. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted by tonyrayhutchison
on 2008-04-30 23:00:41
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This was beautiful. Gave me hope that no matter how great the distance love will find a way. Peace.
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Posted by ColoradoDreamin
on 2008-04-30 23:33:50
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Wow what a post,tony you are a great poet my friend!
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Posted by natureboy
on 2008-05-01 03:02:07
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Tony this is beautiful, I think there are a lot of people who can relate to this poem, i think you have toutched many a heart string
love you ;) xx
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Posted by missmarie
on 2008-05-01 07:29:48
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aww tony, you can be my younger brother....Alot younger..hahaha...29 huh?? You are just a baby in diapers...hahahaha...I crack my self up....
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Posted by Hollis
on 2008-05-01 07:40:25
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colorado dreaming, love's out there. the real deal whirlwind, sweep your heart away kind of fairytail love. It's funny but people always think that there true love must live within 90 miles of them. This is a BIG world! Why cant my true love live on the otherside of it?
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Posted by tonyrayhutchison
on 2008-05-01 08:17:37
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Natureboy, glad you liked it! missmarie, my heart belongs to you;) my saving grace. Thank you friend
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Posted by tonyrayhutchison
on 2008-05-01 08:18:41
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and to Hollis, DIAPERS!!!! I 'll have you know, I've been in pullups for a whole year now! that makes me a big boy:]
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Posted by tonyrayhutchison
on 2008-05-01 08:20:30
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Thank you, that made me smile
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Posted by prelude2it
on 2008-05-01 10:07:16
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hahaha...pull-up huh....you are so funny..
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Posted by Hollis
on 2008-05-01 19:36:48
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HI Tony,
This is one of most beautiful poems yet. U really have a way with words.
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Posted by dreampower
on 2008-05-01 20:06:28
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You, tony, are one talented guy. Keep these coming...I know a lot of people can relate to this. Really touching.
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Posted by angelwings
on 2008-05-02 02:15:57
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