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I'd like to know you better

I read your thoughts
and feel your pain.
I know your hurt
because I feel the same.

I leave kind words
and want to say more
but thats not what Ben
built this place for.

You seem so broken,
at the same time strong,
A lover looking
for a love not wrong.

advice I give on occasion
sometimes just kind words.
more I wish I could tell you,
but theres not enough room in this verse

Just a hint, or a nudge
I'd make my advance
instead I'll write this cryptic poem
rather than give love a chance.



You read me, I know you do. You intrigue me, you make me want to know you. I wish I knew if you'd take this well, and I hope you dont take this wrong. I'm posting this, but I'm worried it'll hurt you. I hope it dont. You seem to have an amazing heart, and now I'm just rambling, so I'll leave it be.

Posted by tonyrayhutchison on 2008-05-09 22:40:22 | Rating: | Views: 318


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Posted by
EasyToSay
on 2008-05-09 23:40:22
 
Tony - wow ... I'm sure whoever it is that you've written about would MORE than WELCOME getting to know you better.
You are a sweetie, definitely, ah huh!
Have a great week-end my friend.
:)
 
 

Posted by
tonyrayhutchison
on 2008-05-10 00:19:22
 
I like to joke, I love to play, but this one here is all real. She makes me feel, to think, to remember... I'm not talking some internet "hey you got a webcam;)" creepy thing, I log on to check for her posts, I love to see her comment me, I want so badly to get an IM, an email, something that says she sees me. Her heart is beautiful.. I hope she knows that.
 
 

Posted by
jessicahgist
on 2008-05-10 02:20:30
 
that is every sweet. im sure she will care for you too. very nice poem. :)
 
 

Posted by
missmarie
on 2008-05-10 11:16:52
 
Tell me? aww i wanna know, who's the lucky lady?
lovely words, i hope she apreciates it honey x
 
 

Posted by
spiritualcoma
on 2008-05-10 11:27:27
 
that was really good tony, hope she reads this and sends ya an e-mail or something. peace bro.
 
 

Posted by
Nutshell
on 2008-05-10 11:54:51
 
I do feel this way about you tony..... finally we can be together..
 
 

Posted by
tonyrayhutchison
on 2008-05-10 12:05:29
 
HELL YES!!!! its on, me and nutshell;)!!! hey gang ,I told the lady, and out of respect I dont think I should tell everybody. Trust me when I say this, she is great, I hope we become good friends ,and I look forward to getting to know her better.
 
 

Posted by
missmarie
on 2008-05-10 12:23:58
 
tony?....Nutshell? *sniff* how could you!!!!!!

*runs away slamming the door to thoughts behind her*
 
 

Posted by
dreampower
on 2008-05-10 15:18:25
 
Tony
I hope the lady in question knows how extremely fortunate she is.....S
 
 

Posted by
Hollis
on 2008-05-10 15:27:40
 
tony,
That is so sweet. I am sure she will figure it out. Hopefully sooner than later...Smile becuz I know you....
 
 

Posted by
ColoradoDreamin
on 2008-05-11 00:36:51
 
I don't think she will be hurt by this ... it's beautiful, honest and from the heart. If she's going through a difficult time her confidence may be low. She might be feeling like no one would be interested or want to get to know her better. Sometimes a "have a nice day" or "thinking of you" email is nice. While not to pushy it can open up the lines of communication a bit. Good luck to you.
 
 

Posted by
angelwings
on 2008-05-16 02:17:47
 
One lucky lady indeed :) I'm glad you found someone you can connect with, Tony. Glad that she makes you smile. Wonderful post, and she is really, really lucky. I hope she realises that too!! Take care :)
 
 

Posted by
heatherslife
on 2008-05-29 14:18:48
 
That was beautiful. I cant stand crying at work.

 
 


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