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Early afternoon rant
you wont let me live it down
no deeds put to rest
I know I said some hurtful things
but I figured we would last.
In hell I'd gladly walk
carrying you if need be
but to many tears in happy times
and you up and leave me.
my life is getting better
I know its only been a few weeks
but what you did when you left
now drives my everything.
I work and play, and often think.
I cook and write, and sing
and late at night when your ghost returns
I face it almost gladly.
I'm growing stronger everyday
I'm learning how to stand
but I do wish that you were here
to see me become a man.
You left me so I guess we're through
and you know what, thats fine
But watch me darlin and see me grow,
it'll be you missin' me in time.




Tiffanie, you do haunt my every action, my thoughts, my dreams. But I'm turning that into a "never again".  I'll never again have a woman say, the things you said to me. I'll never again be so worthless that she has no choice but to leave me. I'll never again be hurt by a weak hearted love, because the next time I think I find a heart to beat in tune with mine, I'll make sure she's strong enough to be there through the bad times.
Posted by tonyrayhutchison on 2008-04-27 13:40:04 | Rating: | Views: 120


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Posted by
erica3
on 2008-04-27 13:46:06
 
tony this is a really great poem. i love what you said in your little paragraph about finding someone who will be there with you through it all. yay tony. now lets go find him a new woman! hehe :p jk tony. great post!
 
 

Posted by
missmarie
on 2008-04-27 14:17:22
 
Tony, you deserve someone who will be there through the good and bad times, someone to hold you and be held right back, someone to laugh and cry with, a woman who won't let you down and will hold her promises to you and you to her.
i keep saying this but...

If we don't lean on each other then we will fall down.

i know i keep saying it, but its so very true.
Great poem by the way
Love you 'tiger' he he x x

Grrrrr...
 
 

Posted by
dreampower
on 2008-04-27 17:07:05
 
Hello Tony
I'm glad to see ur trying to move on...smile...
S
 
 

Posted by
angelwings
on 2008-04-28 01:33:09
 
That was a great poem, tony. You're brilliant at expressing yourself. Loved the last two lines of ur poem. Really did.
Oh and i loved this -
"the next time I think I find a heart to beat in tune with mine, I'll make sure she's strong enough to be there through the bad times."
You expressed urself beautifully. I'm so sure you'll find the one for you. Good luck! :)
 
 

Posted by
spiritualcoma
on 2008-04-28 13:41:08
 
excellent words tony, and a godd sign you're heading towards a better path.
 
 

Posted by
EasyToSay
on 2008-04-28 16:42:29
 
hey this was lovely and well written. i think I've said it before, take it as a lesson and make your life richer for the ... ehh... umm experience.
Your heart will be stronger, your mind wiser.
You write so well!
 
 

Posted by
Hollis
on 2008-04-30 16:29:29
 
Excellent blog Tony,
But never say never....Life is full of people that will hurt you and leave...Please just know that one day that true love will find you, so don't become someone with a hard shell....
 
 

Posted by
thoughtXpress
on 2008-07-15 02:16:12
 
beautifully xpressed.........
findin someone 2 b with u in shade n heat......
(but no smiles)
 
 


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