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nice conclusion, love the rhythm
you tell your story very well
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The End or Not the End on 2009-05-24 11:56:09 |
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yes i do have other poems similar to this, it'd be great for you to check them out as i will do the same with yours!
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desert death on 2009-05-24 11:51:43 |
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"some one to share my silence" great line
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soul sick on 2009-05-19 00:04:52 |
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thanks for acknowledging!
(go atheists)
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geeky girl on 2009-05-18 23:51:29 |
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the circle of people are the few individuals i can hang out with. they are considered "ugly". despite this they are immersed in their happiness forgetting the burdens of superficiality, but i cannot omit.
i'm glad you liked it
isn't it nice that obstacles in life can inspire writings?
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we are ugly spinning people on 2009-05-18 23:45:34 |
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last 3 lines i really like
they're astute
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where is he? on 2009-05-01 00:54:30 |
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