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Darkness
by walking away
u ripped out my heart
it caused me pain
that no docter could heal
only time could heal my wound
but there would still be a scar
where my heart once was
since then all i felt was coldness
all the warmth in my life
left when u walked away
then one day i recieved a package
a patched up heart lied inside
i stared in horror at what u had done
not believeing what lied in front of my face
i couldn't believe that u had done that
my heart that was once so beautiful
and capable of love
was now torn and patched
and full of darkness and hate
and on that day i vowed
i'd make u pay
for what u had done to my heart
and in the end
i got my revenge
and now i doubt
that u will ever do that to anyone else
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I can feel what you are feeling in the poem. Nothing worse than a torn & broken heart. But remember times will also fade the scar, especially when you are only 13.
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Posted by Gwatlan
on 2008-01-31 20:55:14
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Hi,
I enjoyed reading your blog.
Pray to the Lord Jesus and He will surely heal you!
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Posted by kathyjoyful2day
on 2008-01-31 21:59:23
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Remember this, my dear, family and friends may break and scar your heart, but each time this happens your spirit grows stronger. One day it will be your spirit that will be your armor, your strength and your victory!
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Posted by jthomas
on 2008-02-01 09:36:57
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good writing... and remember, time aheals all wounds, as well as "wounding all heels"!
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Posted by wlamebull
on 2008-02-01 09:46:59
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