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 Eternal Star
On a clear starry night,
There once was a magical sight,
A single star grew so bright,
Glowing wisely in her own light.

With soothing words and tender thoughts,
Soon she captured all our hearts,
Every lonely creature felt her warmth.
Venus held her luminous arms,
Mercury succumbed to her charms.

All the planets jilted the sun,
And fled to this glorious one.

The angry sun summoned a cloud,
In sharp cruel words thundered aloud:
“Go and ambush that new star,
I will watch you from afar!”

Edged on by his overlord
Descended upon her this dark cloud,
Shrouding her from all and sundry.
Venus hid her face in shame,
Moon cried and felt so lame.

But Great Mercury could not be fooled
And spoke thus, “This is just a passing cloud.
When this dark night is gone,
Another day is to shine,
Grieve not over this eternal star.”



In loving memory of Lalligal.
    Posted by thehseenz on 2008-12-18 05:12:40 | Rating: | Views: 167
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Beautiful post - really lovely. :)
Posted by  EasyToSay  on 2008-12-18 05:54:48 
  
Thank you Easy :)
Posted by  thehseenz  on 2008-12-18 05:57:34 
  
amazing:)
loved it
Posted by  limaindia  on 2008-12-18 06:18:32 
  
Beautiful post kiddo:)
Posted by  pitapie50  on 2008-12-18 06:29:59 
  
Thank you limaindia and pitapie50.
Posted by  thehseenz  on 2008-12-18 06:52:21 
  
Amazing - beautiful and very apt.
Posted by  overthehillandfar...  on 2008-12-18 07:20:56 
  
Very nicely written.

peace :) shemelts
Posted by  shemelts  on 2008-12-18 08:16:36 
  
Truly beautiful and so full of meaning and feelings. A wonderful tribute.
Posted by  Tony51203  on 2008-12-18 08:17:07 
  
By God's grace. After writing this, I was in two minds whether to really post it or not, whether it was appropriate. Thank you for putting my mind at ease.
Posted by  thehseenz  on 2008-12-18 09:28:54 
  
That was beasutiful...Very touching...
funnyman
Posted by  funnyman57  on 2008-12-18 11:45:45 
  
Lovely words!As always from you.
Posted by  cabinfever  on 2008-12-18 12:50:02 
  
I'm glad you posted this poem, it's lovely and very appropriate. Peace.
Posted by  Ellie2008  on 2008-12-18 15:10:19 
  
mmmmm! Gorgeous! It gives hope! Hope is all that I really have left. thanks!
Posted by  Chomwedzi  on 2008-12-19 10:52:19 
  
A beautifully written tribute, to an angel who will live forever in the hearts of all who were blessed to know her. The last line brought a feeling of hope and peace to my spirit. Peace.
Posted by  ColoradoDreamin  on 2008-12-19 20:40:21 
  
I am sorry I could not respond to your comments sooner. My net connection has become insufferably slow for inexplicable reasons.

Every time I enter Thoughts, I am heartened by the kindness of the people here. Thank you all for the reassurance and for honoring the memory of Sydney. May peace be upon her.
Posted by  thehseenz  on 2008-12-19 21:23:40 
  
Oh dear!That was simply so moving.I am very proud of you as a friend.Here's cheers to good human beings!May Sydney's soul rest in peace.Amen!
Posted by  snakewoman  on 2008-12-20 09:36:18 
  
Wow that poem was so very amazing. It shows that you have an insightful mind and loving heart.
Posted by  michelle8angels  on 2008-12-20 13:19:39 
  
wow I wish I could write as good as this I would certainly be published by now. Nice piece of poetry.
Posted by  foolm8  on 2008-12-20 18:01:39 
  
Thank you so much for your love and sorry again for not being able to post much comments of late, my dear friends (the net connection is still excruciatingly slow). It is an honour to have you guys as my friends. Thoughts is a fount of love that transcends all human-made barriers of class, religion, and nationality and I am blessed to be able to drink from it. Sydney was the epitome of the world citizen. May peace be upon her.
Posted by  thehseenz  on 2008-12-21 08:27:31 
  
I bookmarked your site because I don't want to miss any of your writing.
Posted by  leegaylord  on 2008-12-28 12:42:04 
  
Thank you.
Posted by  thehseenz  on 2008-12-30 07:12:40 
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