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Eyes met for the first time,
Observed obvious assets,
Smiles exchanged (one slightly crooked),
Generic questions and answers,
Laughter enfolds,
Fingertips accidentally make contact,
Surge of unexpected electricity,
Pulled out of their zone by others,
Cant help stealing glances,
Rendezvous at a later hour,
Everyone else seems unimportant,
Sexual tension heightened,
Sweaty palms and nervous laughter,
He gains courage to lean in,
Eyes closed anticipating the crash of their lips,
She gets flooded with second thoughts,
Contact made,
Lips to cheek.
The above "poem" (I guess you could call it) was randomly created just now. Anywho, it really has nothing to do with me at the moment. Im not sure why my subconcious is creating weird thoughts. I havent blogged in a while. Hmm lets see...where did I leave off...well I cant quite remember but I will start off with mothers day. I spent the day (kinda) with my mom, didnt really do anything special. She said she didnt want us to make a big deal. It was pretty late at night when my mom showed up, crying. I didnt know how to react. Even though she said she didnt want anything, I wrote her a letter. I tied it up with a pretty ribbon and added some nibs (her fav candy). I had left it on her pillow so she found it right before she went to sleep. I had never made anyone cry from my wiriting. I gave her a hug and soon I was crying and it was just one big sobfest. One of the lines in the letter I wrote was "I will be so lucky if I become half of what you are." She looked me in the eyes and said, "You know, Im 100% positive you are going to be way more than the person I am." I dont think im ever going to forget those words. It meant so much hearing it from her. She gave me one last firm hug and then started laughing saying that she had to leave or she wouldnt be able to stop crying. We laughed together, she gave me a kiss and I watched her leave. God, I love my mom.
So this turned out to be a rather sappy blog. It seems like if it was a present, it would be wrapped in pink. I promise the next one will be a little more hardcore. Something that would go with metal studs and chains. Or at the very least, a little bit of leather.
What I hear:
Learn to Fly--> Foo Fighters |
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Posted by smileforthecamera on 2008-05-17 22:09:45 | Rating: | Views: 133
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first the poem was great. second the story was moving, and third(forgive me) I'm sooo sticking around for the leather and chains!!!;)
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Posted by tonyrayhutchison
on 2008-05-17 22:12:52
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wow, i dont know what to say other than wat tonyrayhutchison said, but i felt i had to say something!
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Posted by daydream4evr
on 2008-05-17 23:38:48
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"It seems like if it was a present, it would be wrapped in pink. I promise the next one will be a little more hardcore. Something that would go with metal studs and chains. Or at the very least, a little bit of leather"
I really, really loved those lines!! :D
It wasnt sappy at all...it was really touching and sweet :) Thanks for sharing this!
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Posted by angelwings
on 2008-05-18 02:28:11
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..................................How did you write that poem?? Were you watching me yesterday?? Shit I can't believe you blogged something that happened to me on the same day.
I'm glad you get on with your mum that much. I would never be able to cry with my mum. Or even tell her I love her for that matter. Probably coz I'm a guy LOL.
Studs and Chains?? 80's or what!!! :P
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Posted by eeerm
on 2008-05-18 05:23:21
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Wow Smiles the poem was terrific you should write more,you have talent.I'm a guy and im going to take a huge step and say i also love my mum,okay just like the rest can't wait for the HARDCORE.hehe. cheers.
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Posted by natureboy
on 2008-05-18 06:03:38
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First off, I just want to say a HUGE thank you to all of you!! I dont consider myself a poet at all but i rather liked this one (Eeerm: Thats a little freaky yet cool at the same time :P) I couldnt help but smile as I read the comments :] Haha it seems I have no choice but to make a hardcore blog next! Hmm that should be interesting :P
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Posted by smileforthecamera
on 2008-05-18 11:46:15
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ur poem ws gud
n the letter ws so sweet............
u write well
n u r blessed u can tell ur mom dat u luv her
simply luvly...........
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Posted by thoughtXpress
on 2008-05-19 05:22:23
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An amazing poem smiles, should definately write more. And a touching story as well, you and your mom are lucky to have such love between each other.
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Posted by spiritualcoma
on 2008-05-20 01:32:01
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Fashionably late as ever, lol.
Nice poem, it took me though some past memories and exposed my current speculative events with her. (should be in italics)
The blog was kinda hallmarkish but it's all good 'cause it was overshadowed by your awesomeness.
Stand and take notice at ":)4thecamera"
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Posted by November
on 2008-05-22 22:39:43
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Foo Fighters is fuckin ace
PS: Do not flag this . . . .
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Posted by November
on 2008-05-22 22:47:14
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You do have good taste in music, I'm happy for you to have a loving open family. Wish I could have the same. We're no that open.
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Posted by yadokta
on 2008-05-25 14:34:35
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WOW
2 STORIES FOR THE PRICE OF ONE, I LOVED BOTH...YOU REALLY CAPTURED "THAT" SPECIAL FEELING IN THE FIRST ONE, THE POEM AND THE STORY ABOUT YOU AND YOUR MOM ALMOST MADE ME CRY...HOW LUCKY TO HAVE SUCH A WONDERFUL RELATIONSHIP WITH YOUR MOM.
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Posted by roe
on 2008-05-30 03:15:50
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Whoa,I love the poem. You are an amazing writer.
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Posted by Wickedlovely826
on 2008-05-31 14:22:33
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