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can't stop thinking bout you
your all thats on my mind
when i think about you
i want to get last in my head all the time
you make me feel so good inside
i just want to be by your side
together we will eventually be
together we will make the world see
that we are what songs are wrote about
for that they will have no doubt
even the thousands of miles that keep us apart
can't fade the feelings in our hearts
i won't ever let you down
not even for a moments chance
i won't ever leave you alone
not even for a moments glance
my whole life i've been waiting to find
someone as true as you to become mine
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Posted by simply_torn on 2008-02-08 22:47:28 | Rating: | Views: 96
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thanks you. this is one of the few that is true.
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Posted by simply_torn
on 2008-02-10 05:20:53
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good ideas, but the style and actual writing lacks originality and creative imaging. not very interesting basically. keep it up though. i would recommend reading some poetry of more famous poets to get an idea of what i mean. personally i like kerouack(sp?)
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Posted by walruskid
on 2008-02-12 11:28:32
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