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reflections of pride
smother all else inside
sometimes when i fear my own smile
but my swirling fright 
seeps like light into night
I'm hiding again for a while
until lonely days
in a dissipating haze
fade velvet just like a sunset glow
and soul aflame 
scorch withering shame
i'll only give what you chose to know

    Posted by sidewalksurfer on 2009-01-26 21:47:31 | Rating: | Views: 77
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"I'll only give what you chose to know" .... this line speaks volumes to me right now. I tend to be too much of an open book. I need to wait until asked :) Enjoyed this one.
Posted by  EasyToSay  on 2009-01-27 05:30:15 
  
I second that, "I'll only give what you chose to know" a line that seems to sum up so much. Fantastic my friend!
Posted by  theinnermonologue  on 2009-01-29 15:12:55 
  
"fade velvet just like a sunset glow
and soul aflame
scorch withering shame
i'll only give what you chose to know"
B.E.A.UTIFUL.
and what the others say is the same for me.
but hey, i want to know everything and anything. can you give that to me or am i going to have to take it? lol.
but im not going to lie. . . i dont really understand this one. got the ending but the beginning thru me. I KNOW IM STUPID. dont be mean.
Posted by  nahtays_girl007  on 2009-04-26 14:59:23 
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