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 the girl with the razor
she sits on the floor
with the razor in front of her
the lies the deciet, shes sick of it all
she picks up the razor and slices her wrist
the blood tricles down and drips off at her elbow
it feels as cold as ice

knock knockĀ a rap at the door
in walks alittle girls with pigtails in her hair
its herself age 6
before the fights and heavy eyeliner
a simpler time

her life flashes before her eyes
until she reaches the exact moment when everything changed
the razor slips threw her delicate fingers
the blood still cold and running

tears are rolling down her face
she cant breathe
the horrible memories
are suffocating her
her idealistic fountain of youth goes out the window with one mistake

the cuts will fade but the memories wont
the girl that she once was is walking away
the girl with the razor is weeping for her to come back
but whats done is done and that is that
    Posted by shady_love on 2007-10-27 06:27:13 | Rating: | Views: 226
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Hard hitting - thank you for sharing
Posted by  kentlass  on 2007-10-27 06:35:12 
  
that sent tingles down my spine
Posted by  deepthinker21  on 2007-10-27 07:13:12 
  
Something so honest is refreshing.
Posted by  alias1884  on 2007-10-27 09:43:18 
  
hi shady!
awful stuff :o(
it's a shame that you can't try to pull a glimmer of hope out of it or some little twist that would give it a positive spin in the end...
:o)
cheers!
Posted by  badlydrawnstickman  on 2007-10-27 09:52:16 
  
There's no scars anymore..but it still hurts...
Posted by  Tatsuki  on 2007-10-28 10:15:42 
  
Thanks for sharing and so true in many aspects in life
Posted by  tigerluv  on 2007-12-21 08:25:10 
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