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 Detention's over...
       I've been trying to come up with a word picture of what I'm trying to be about.. and this is what I came up with:

       We're like Schoolchildren in detention.. we try to behave, we honestly do.. we learn the rules, sit up straight.. but we just can't avoid that spitwad..or hitting the kid next to us when he teases us.. or taking some other kids book.. So we're always in detention.. and some get defiant.. "I don't care.. you can't make me!" and some make excuses.. "it's not my fault.. the teacher doesn't like me."
and some justify it.. "we're in detention for our own good.. we're bad and must be punished." and some even rationalize it.. "it's only detention if we think it is." and so we write "I will be good"on the blackboard hundreds of times; we write out apologies to the teacher; we make resolutions.. and wind up right back in detention.
      Then- Miracle of Miracles.. someone does our time for us. we didn't earn freedom.. but here it is. they throw open the doors and we can go outside.. out onto the green grass and the big world..
       And we're afraid. It's too big.. we don't know what's out there. we don't know how to be free.. but in detention we knew exactly what to do. we knew everything in the room.. every desk, every tile on the wall.. we didn't have to guess if things were dangerous. we didn't have to think.. and many of us voluntarily go back into detention..and justify it. "we haven't been punished enough.." or "out there I'm nothing, but in here I'm important.." or.. "I don't like the kids out there.."
        When we should be running as hard as we can just because it feels so good.. and rolling around on the grass in sheer happiness and just lie on our backs and laugh in delirious joy. we never have to be in detention again.. God's grace has opened the doors. Come on.. let's go play ball..


    Posted by pastormike on 2009-11-04 23:13:48 | Rating: | Views: 95
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Having been a teacher, I of course love this analogy...its sweet and wonderful...you have such a way with words!
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-11-05 00:05:16 
  
thank you darlin'- I truly do think this describes where I'm coming from..
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-05 00:44:21 
  
Mike..Nicely written. Explains it well. :)

peace :) shemelts
Posted by  shemelts  on 2009-11-05 09:28:41 
  
thanks darlin'- it seemed to say what I wanted..
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-05 09:48:27 
  
I'll play, how bout I take 2nd base. LOL God bless you PM.
Posted by  BeJeweled  on 2009-11-05 09:40:09 
  
you got it! I'm on first.. left handed. or I might pitch with my famous screwball..takes one to throw one...
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-05 09:51:01 
  
lets go
Posted by  puck  on 2009-11-05 12:28:12 
  
first overs.. set up the wickets...
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-05 14:33:02 
  
I like that!!!
Posted by  overthehillandfar...  on 2009-11-05 17:20:42 
  
thanks dear.. I think this is what I try to preach simplified..
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-05 17:32:44 
  
i like this very much, i love a good analogy! now if only we can behave :) hehe
Posted by  littlespirit  on 2009-11-06 14:14:51 
  
don't have to.. we're forgiven.. we may get all skinned up by misbehaving.. but not go back to detention. unless we go there voluntarily. that's why we're so happy...
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-06 14:28:57 
  
What a great post! I love thinking of it as a freedom...it is! Good, good job, pastor!
Posted by  JenniferGraves  on 2009-11-06 21:05:58 
  
yes..it sure is!and joy is the best response.. thanks Jennifer!
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-06 21:11:38 
  
When you said "...is!and joy..."

It looks as if you are making a sort of beautiful e.e. cummings pun on island joy.
Posted by  dreadnaught  on 2009-11-11 04:18:28 
  
actually, the l is supposed to be a comma.."sure is, and joy".. Fruedian slip?
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-11 12:16:44 
  
Doesn't this require original guilt Mike?
Posted by  desinq  on 2009-11-11 04:26:21 
  
not guilt.. foolishness. I love and apply Brendan Mannings idea of Ragamuffins. Ragamuffins can be really good people.. they just don't have something necessary to get along in this world. Smarts, drive, luck, opportunity, education, ambition.. something.. and spiritually we're all ragamuffins...
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-11 12:22:40 
  
Sorry to whine on but this omniscient being responsible for our existence designed us with a flaw in the glass, so to speak, on purpose? Thus requiring a bit of maintenance before we even left the shop? On purpose? If that were Ford or BMW, they'd recall the model and replace the flawed spirit, no?
Maybe I'm guilty of trying to lead a dead horse to water. Not you, rather in my use of a 3 dimensional, structuralist model, I miss the point of existence, as I don't see any other point than happenstance. In addition I consciously lack the required faith to believe the various disseminated teachings and preachings about deities getting about this blue ball.
Although 'ragamuffin' is a lovely word, kind of like incompetent and essentially harmless vagabond.
You know, I don't even think I am trying to subtly goad you into a debate or looking for a justification of your thought. No, not at all. Maybe I just hated detention and I am irritated with any idea that implies that I have not left it well behind. Yep that feels about right. Shallow, but there you go.
Posted by  desinq  on 2009-11-12 17:10:00 
  
No.. it is tough to reconcile "omniscient" with flawed humanity. But because I believe God is pure love.. I think it is simply.. he needed something to love.. not just admire his handiwork. and he is determined to love us into loving each other. this was really written more for believers.. Specifically "sour Saints" who want everybody back in their little version of detention. if we believe that we've been "saved" (which i don't believe in the same sense they do) why are we so dour and angry and condemning? for Christ's sake!(excuse the pun..) get out there and celebrate! but.. I do believe we are.. from self imposed limitations..keeping ourselves in detention in a humanistic way too. we can't go forward because we can't forget the past.. and our present wants cost so much we have nothing left for the future. and the remedy is less selfishness and more love of others..which is what faith should be about.. and so should humanism..
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-12 20:53:26 
  
Paradox, why do I feel the notion of pure love is a little difficult to digest when so much that is experience by organic forms on this blue ball is totally hideous. Not just human initiated but natural as well, like earthquakes. Take for example the pain of and in Iraq, or the Ice addict in the alley, or my back. That is some special kind of affection. Unless we're talking god on a strictly quantum potential basis. Nup, can't stay with paradox, I feel I have to move towards contradiction.
Posted by  desinq  on 2009-11-13 00:17:12 
  
I understand.. until you've experienced having been touched by that pure Love there's no point of reference. best I can do.. the forces that bind this universe are fixed and balanced with incredible precision.. to prevent a hurricane would mean Love has to break those laws.. and if it did once we'd expect it again.. and become demanding and dependent. the short term love would be to prevent it.. but the long term love.. to make us understand, predict and protect.. is the greater love..though we can't see it. 100 years ago Katrina would have had a toll 10 times as great.. look at Galveston..hopefully in another 50 years the toll will be less yet.. and countless generations will benefit from what we're learning the hard way..rose colored glasses,I know..but a wise man said "Love always hopes.." same thing in our lives.. if Love fixed it all we wouldn't learn the bitter lessons we need to..we wouldn't grow..and that wouldn't be the greatest Love. we're like ants crawling on a gigantic picture.. all we see is dark.. but if we could stand where Love does..we'd see that we're so close to the light.. and the only way to the light is through the darkness. I'm really not the best at philosophical arguments..my religious experience has altered my inner socrates..
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-13 00:56:45 
  
I can understand the requirement for hope to be important to negotiate the human condition of greater ignorance and I don't begrudge that of anyone. Possibly the need is negated slightly with acceptance of a sense of meaninglessness. In that meaning is limited to us by our limited ability to understand. So I can see the place a faith could occupy. Inner socrates! Are you alluding to compassion and the human ability to empathise?
I don't want to pry, well I suppose that is a lie but what is it you mean by 'religious experience'?
Posted by  desinq  on 2009-11-13 19:46:26 
  
well.. I think I mean simply that I've felt directly the Force that I call God. I find myself speaking words that simply aren't mine.. they are beyond me.. and I feel a power within.. and so do the people listening.. and afterwards I'm limp as a dishrag.. I simply can't deny that something beyond understanding is happening.. no matter I philosophically deny that it can..so Philosophical arguements just seem to me kind of empty. there was a time I was into it.. but now it seems like I've found something beyond Philosophy. I can't possibly expect anyone who hasn't felt this to understand how it feels..the church does an absolutely lousy job of it. it is not an adreniline induced frenzy.. nor is it a warm fuzzy feeling. it just is..and I simply don't believe I am deluded. and.. the words I'm given change lives.. and bring comfort.. that's my bottom line..
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-14 01:40:07 
  
Cool
Posted by  desinq  on 2009-11-14 02:51:02 
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