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 The Letter (part 5)

    I slid the slender steal blade of an offset letter ripper into the narrow gap of unlinked glue and drew my sword across its saliva induced welding. A hot cauldron of anxious curiosity was being cooked in my belly, burning the layers of visceral tissue. I had received my estranged husband's mail before, typically it was the benign looking, and futile, request of a creditor. I had become quite familiar with the ploy; long business size envelope, two transparent windows for addresses, one of which would be nameless and sent from either Michigan or Texas. But this was not the usual form letter from a collection agency. Everything about it pointed otherwise.

    I stuck my good hand, the unwounded one, into the envelope's burrow, and pawed at its contents. The paper felt thick and rich, proud. Unlike a cheaply printed form letter with little identity, it had a weighted substance which begged its intenders attention. I tugged on the mid section of the folded captivator, pulling it from its cave. My lungs craved a fresh dose of oxygen. With a deep inhalation I vacuumed the available atmosphere, unfolded the letter and began to read. 

                        Mr. Alexander Green,
                                     
      It has come to our attention that a problem may have occurred within the scope of our practice.
  We are diligently trying to inform all of our clients about this potential concern. However, we have
  been unable to reach you by phone. As stated in your contract with us, it is vital that we stay current
  with each other. We MUST have a better means of communication. You should recall that this was
  made very clear at our many meetings with each other.

  Please contact us as soon you review this correspondence. We have liberal openings available
  by appointment as time is of the essence in this matter. Arrangements can be made for travel
  compensation. I assume you will respond promptly, Alex, as per our initial agreement. Chance
  has it that this alert could be quite "detrimental"  if not attended to in the proper time frame.

                           Sincer e regards,
                      Mr. E. Crowe/CL Laboratories Inc.    
    Posted by paperlily on 2008-07-14 14:30:05 | Rating: | Views: 127
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your word usage is astounding...talk about jealous! but uff! this just whets the tongue...clearly you're going to insist on keeping me on pins and needles!
cheers!
:)
Posted by  badlydrawnstickman  on 2008-07-14 15:38:53 
  
funny, i felt the same way about you when i stubbed my reading toe on your stories. i am still nursing that wound ( so on pins and needles you'll stay!!) and never would've imagined receiving such lovely comments from you (the injurer) LOL.
Anyhow, my prescribed intent with this piece was for it to become a bit more infectious.
...(honestly, i'm just winging the heck outta this thing and will probably get stuck in a corner...
OR end up with a novel for corner shelf)
Posted by  paperlily  on 2008-07-14 23:20:07 
  
Me too, jealous.
Posted by  circe  on 2008-07-15 20:47:21 
  
u two are too kind. what encouraging supporters you both have been . u don't know what it means to me!!
LOVE you two!
Posted by  paperlily  on 2008-07-16 11:51:16 
  
I too wanted to comment on your use of words, unbelievable! Your writing flows and glows!
Posted by  roe  on 2008-07-23 00:34:25 
  
"I slid the slender steal blade of an offset letter ripper into the narrow gap of unlinked glue and drew my sword across its saliva induced welding."

I opened a letter was never described better!
Posted by  roe  on 2008-07-23 00:37:29 
  
The mystery deepens, creating another layer. I wondering about how much planning you do before you start writing.
Posted by  stevehayes13  on 2009-06-23 07:47:14 
  
stevehayes13...that's funny. planning, subjective really, is it not?
Posted by  paperlily  on 2009-06-23 16:00:34 
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