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A pretty maiden walks on forth,she wears beauty as a colour cloth,her fair hair stumbles down the cheeks,a pasteured body, shows fine peaks,heading for lakes and streams,searching for the prince of dreams,milady's skin compliments and beams.She wears a charasmatic smile,the villages can see it from a mile,that's her majestic style,as the picturesque egyptian nile, her head wearing a golden crown,blistering a many land and town,waiting for a sign to calm her, there forth rides A MAN IN ARMOUR. |
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Posted by natureboy on 2008-07-06 12:16:00 | Rating: | Views: 65
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Hey nature this is absolutely a brilliant and magnificent piece of writing, the way you put words together is superb,you are a talented writer,who i feel deserves much more comments,your writing deserves it,i give this 10 stars,well done!
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Posted by supercoolguy
on 2008-07-06 10:56:53
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i love this! a fairytale with a happy ever after. i agree with supercool, you are very talented and you do deserve far more comments. this is great hun!
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Posted by pixierose
on 2008-07-06 11:06:00
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Hahahaha thanks SUPERCOOL for the read,i appreciate your comment. Thanks soooo much PIXIE my best mate,hahaha i'm glad you enjoyed the writing. Thanks friend.
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Posted by natureboy
on 2008-07-07 04:39:14
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i love your style of writing. keep these coming, nature :)
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Posted by angelwings
on 2008-07-09 06:39:36
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