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While we're...
The loss of control is breathtaking
while we’re moving on the dance floor

The music is soul-stirring
while we’re caressing each beat

The crowd is secretly tantalizing
while we’re touching in front of an audience

The heat between our bodies is mesmerizing
while we’re slowly grinding to each erotic rhythm

The smell of your body is intoxicating
while we’re dripping from each other’s heat

The feeling from your touch is addicting
while we’re hoping this night won’t end

The thought of us is so enticing
while we’re making love to a new sound

The sadness of your goodbye is crushing
while we’re tearfully letting each other go…
Posted by nadira on 2008-02-18 19:04:50 | Rating: n/a | Views: 73


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Posted by
brainstormer
on 2008-02-19 03:48:04
 
Just my POV, the ending came too quickly. Making love and then BAM bye. Bad relations:P Work it out a bit more. Stretch the dough. Seems you are daydreaming of a mate again:P Join the club:) Reminds me of a song by--I think--Nickelback that goes something like "dance on into the night...singing A O A O A O A..."
 
 

Posted by
nadira
on 2008-02-19 09:10:03
 
I know... I thought of that again when I posted it last night. However, that is the way it happened. This guy came into my life, we were friends. I had more fun dancing with him one night than I have probably my entire life. There was so much sexual energy between us... He ended up moving away for work. When he came back to visit (probably for the only time), we had the hottest one night stand and that's honesty how it felt. But agree... it probably needs more.
 
 

Posted by
nadira
on 2008-02-19 09:11:16
 
PS - I guess it wasn't a one night stand because we were friends and we knew it was only that one night. Which to be honest, made it an even hotter experience...
 
 


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