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 The window (POEM)
Looking through her window as the leaves begin to change.
Falling gently,orange and red resting on the ground.


The sky so blue above her head,white puffy clouds wisping by.
Looking through her window,it's like a painting she can touch.


But what can be seen looking from the outside in.
Can she be seen as beautiful,as what lies on the other side?


Looking through her window she wonders what people see.
When they look through the glass can they really see me?


Looking through her window she see's a beautiful world.
But her side of the glass is shattered and that's all you can see.



Looking through her window not knowing what others see.
Can they see past the broken glass can they see me?
    Posted by monicaspeaks on 2009-10-16 10:45:17 | Rating: | Views: 29
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Wow, this is beautifully written!!! And I love what you're talking about, this a great poem!!
Posted by  AshleyZane  on 2009-10-16 16:39:38 
  
thank you..
Posted by  monicaspeaks  on 2009-10-16 16:56:07 
  
This was great. Dont worry i can see you.
Posted by  daniloboy  on 2009-10-18 00:02:44 
  
that's what i feel all the time
seeing the beautiful world makes you happy but then you think what about me??!
love it..nice writings :)
Posted by  tanit  on 2009-10-18 11:31:14 
  
thanks..
Posted by  monicaspeaks  on 2009-10-18 12:18:07 
  
I see you, and your incredible talent at poetry writing.
Posted by  karikaiba  on 2009-10-18 17:30:52 
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