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 Just be (poem)
A new world has opened up to her,a place that should be full of joy and grace.


It's strange to her coming from the dark sorrowful life she once knew.


She can't seem to grasp what it is she should do.


If only she knew how to just be,to release herself from the tangled web she wove,to fly completely free.


Lost in transition not knowing how to be,blinded by the confusion not allowing her to see.


She doesn't know how to be happy and free,if only she knew then she could just be.
    Posted by monicaspeaks on 2009-11-03 09:34:25 | Rating: | Views: 29
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Monica...Very nicely written. We all long for that freedom. Good luck friend.

peace :) shemelts
Posted by  shemelts  on 2009-11-03 10:14:52 
  
Thanks,I'm trying to figure out how to ..just be...
Posted by  monicaspeaks  on 2009-11-03 10:19:32 
  
The serenity to just be is something that doesn't come easily to anyone. Beautiful poem.
Posted by  hammin8r  on 2009-11-03 12:37:36 
  
Thanks,im finding it infact does not come easy...
Posted by  monicaspeaks  on 2009-11-03 12:39:51 
  
Be well friend. Thanks for another inspiring write.
Posted by  vestigesofhermind  on 2009-11-04 01:31:55 
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