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 The Unknown
through the dark, foggy air
an outstreached hand, fingertips dripping with dew
i reach out, but i can not quite touch you
i can see the pearcing blue of your deep eyes
lost for a moment, looking into your soul
you are by my side, out of nowhere you are just there
i can not speak to ask your name
but i feel as if that does not matter
you take me wholey into your heart
and i can feel you, and i love you
 i am overpowered by your love for me
and i can feel your life pulcating through my veins
i can no longer feel myself, yet never more aware of my soul
i still do not know who you are, but know that i need you
i want to be a part of you
but i am not ready you whisper
it is to soon, and you are gone into the darkness

    Posted by missmarie on 2007-12-01 16:39:52 | Rating: | Views: 131
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Wow! Awesome poem :)
Posted by  SubTomato  on 2007-12-01 16:41:10 
  
thanks sub
hugs xx
Posted by  missmarie  on 2007-12-01 16:43:50 
  
Great poem!
Posted by  jessforgets  on 2007-12-01 16:48:33 
  
Very good poem. Makes you wonder is it a Who or a What? Nice poser.
Posted by  scotslad60  on 2007-12-02 06:34:16 
  
Beautiful.xx
What else can i say?xx
Posted by  bubblydi  on 2007-12-03 03:35:08 
  
Very spiritual, Marie.
Posted by  Pauligan  on 2007-12-03 05:22:41 
  
thanks guys, maybe i write better when i'm poorly he he
love to you all
xxxx
Posted by  missmarie  on 2007-12-03 07:52:25 
  
very interesting :)
once again our seemingly endless similarities grow.
very nicely written, i enjoyed it a lot
love
Posted by  ReD_MooN  on 2007-12-04 22:28:39 
  
This drew me in.
It reminds me of the stranger in your dream?
Hmm.
Makes me think.
I have written many poems like this to my mysterious stranger.
Mine just happens to have blue eyes too.
Posted by  DifficultSoul  on 2007-12-11 13:12:52 
  
Thanks Red, xxx
Ds, i was thinking about my dream when i wrote it hmmmm drives you nuts not knowing doesn't it! hugs x
Posted by  missmarie  on 2007-12-11 13:16:04 
  
wonderful
Posted by  Katydids_and_daisies  on 2008-05-24 21:21:03 
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