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See my passion in my tears
Destroy me
rip out my heart
leave me for dead
forget all that we had
put all our memories to rest
it hides all of your guilt
disguises all conscience from sight
until you don't see me again
do away with your heart
while mine is in your path
trodden beneath your feet
and you can't even see it
my heart has been crushed
it is an open wound
your ignorance and cold words like salt
you forever rubbing it in
please read how i feel
til it burns your mind and you understand
break the amulet of love and dreams into two
and its power is weakened
until it is forged together again
me holding the love
you taking the dreams
that power shall never be
i will be forever in love
you shall always keep our dreams
but neither shall work alone
we will be appart, alone, dreamless and without love
i am forever willing
to sacrifice my will for your hope
i want to power, feed your ambition
grasp your dreams, put them in your reach
as i have always tried
that force powered by your love
made the amulet whole
our love and dreams will not be ours
until we power each other once again
don't let the path of normality hide your goal
don't be fooled by the flash of its charm
novelty dies, the flash will fade
while our fire will always burn
your dreams may be hidden, as they have been before
a shiny new amulet can be a non believer
yet another barrier in the path of fate
putting the film on pause while your heart still beats
your path to your goal, the 100 yard line
and you stop to look at a flower that will one day die
one thing will remain still pushing you on
keeping your passion, your anger alive
another one of your kind who wants it, needing
knowing that determination
two people who's goal is one, who cannot do a thing to hurt
cannot produce the thing that will destroy you
i am always holding your hand, no matter how hard you squeeze
blood, tears, joy, fears...
not remembering the bad times
my eyes close, all i see are the smiles
there was no wrong there was just us
crazy, comfprted by craziness
the world cannot touch us
our lives, 'are you going my way?'
our paths will always run parallel
don't let me overtake you
bad man, please don't see yourself
evil man, that was never you
don't try to mend others mistakes
feel for your one true friend
you cry, i wipe your tears, you tremble, i will hold you
someone steals your candy, i will fight for you
'to the death my good man'
no one will hurt you while i have the power
but i feel it draining from my soul
my power shrinking at your hands
you will hold it, 'til you tear us together
don't let the shiny new amulet destroy our dreams
why have stainless steel that will dull and become insignificant
i may not be gold, but at least silver plated
we are bound in a script
to love and be free forever
i love you...i love us(no full stop)
my goodness, its amazing how embarassed i feel about this now, that man made my life a misery, i really cant remember why on earth i was so broken hearted at the end of our relationship when he was so violent to me, i think i was just trapped in the feeling that i couldn't find love again, well i proved my self so wrong, and i really am blushing at this very long poem! we were both musicians, and he was terrified to settle down and have kids because it would stop him succeeding, i was willing to sacrifice everything i ever wanted to be with that man, even if it meant being in a violent relationship forever. i am so glad we split up when we did!
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Posted by missmarie on 2008-02-05 16:33:48 | Rating: | Views: 156
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You are an amazing writer marie.
Whether it be your stories or your poetry.
I am so glad you have found true happiness again.
Sometimes there is always too much water under the bridge but i am so glad you found your boat.
This is brilliant.xx
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Posted by bubblydi
on 2008-02-05 17:15:06
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I'm with bubblydi. That was an amazing poem. It brought a tear to my eye. I can tell it was truely from the heart. Carry on writing, you are very good :)
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Posted by eeerm
on 2008-02-06 05:34:22
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Excellent poem. The emotions you were expressing here just make it better. Glad you have moved on though
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Posted by scotslad60
on 2008-02-06 18:21:25
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I wore that T shirt for a while Marie... I outgrew it moments before it strangled me. You radiate Love and that is what you can expect back. Remember, you're a Goddess :-)
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Posted by Merlyn
on 2008-02-07 06:23:59
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It is funny how we think we want something or someone so bad, then later on, we see the whole picture.
Feelings change...boy do they change.
It is good to look back like this.
It is a strong hearted poem.
It shows your unconditional love.
It will be a reference for me now, at the times, I do not get what I want.
What we want, and what we need are two different things.
I am in the mood to write new love poems, depicting the past.
Gee, we think somewhat alike.
I love you Miss Z.
Good post.
It made me think...and you know how I love to think.
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Posted by DifficultSoul
on 2008-02-09 17:15:49
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Good post marie, very emotionally charged.
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Posted by Forgetmeknot
on 2008-02-09 19:24:48
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Wonderfully written marie..You have a heart of such love...Don't ever lose the depth of your feelings or yourself...Hugs to you.
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Posted by Hollis
on 2008-02-13 16:06:16
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thankyou everyone, i still feel a little embarassed about this, but i think DS makes a good point, its good to reflect, and remember the things that we thought we would die without, and now see that those feelings have gone, we survived and got through to better times
love to you all
big hugs xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Posted by missmarie
on 2008-02-15 19:18:21
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