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 Love is?
i'm not in the mood
can't you leave me alone
if you dont want to help
please just let me stew
pretend everythings fine
like you normally do
or you could just try
make an effort
make me laugh
make me smile
please dont make me cry
i could feel better
if you felt inclined
but you just sit
and wait
for me to come round
force an appology
pretend you are sorry
just to lose the earache
if you want me quiet
then let me just leave
or stop being so thoughtless
do one thing for me
no really just one thing
anything
now you'll get angry
cos i'm mad at you
threaten to leave
as somehow thats easier
than being kind
say sorry 20 times a day
with attidute and a glare
how does that help
why dont you care
you say you do
why doesnt it show
you are so sweet
when everything is fine
you say your a bastard
you wont do it again
"i know i'm terrible"
"why do you stay?"
because i love you
and love is
is?
is?
this?



10/11/07

i hate that this rhymes inĀ  places grr!


    Posted by missmarie on 2007-11-10 12:35:59 | Rating: | Views: 102
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It is good hon, poems can rhyme and flow
xo
Posted by  kentlass  on 2007-11-11 10:05:56 
  
Sincerity can be sensed.
Someone can say sorry a million times, but the time that they mean it, we know it instantly.
Love is...many things...one of those things is long suffering.
May you get the love you give out.
Beautiful poem.
It touched the heart of me.
It describes the feelings I once had for my husband.
He finally meant it.
Peace.
Posted by  DifficultSoul  on 2007-11-11 11:44:55 
  
I love your writing
Posted by  roe  on 2007-11-11 23:51:28 
  
thanks guys, love to you all x
Posted by  missmarie  on 2007-11-13 10:25:15 
  
i agree with DifficultSoul. Someone can say sorry a million times and it really doesn't mean anything unless they really are sorry, sadly most of the time its not a genuine apology, and they just think that it will be better.
Posted by  LittleStar  on 2007-11-13 14:35:56 
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