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I found this poem on a web site that posts romantic odes, this one is about internet love, i thought it was sweet and wanted to share it with you all, The ID that it is credited to is all we know of the person who wrote it, i think this was found on an annonymous blog
Have I Ever
by Ravenz23
Have I ever told you
that if I sit really still and silent,
sometimes. I like to think
I can hear your heart beating
in time with mine?
Have I ever told you
that when I watch you speak to me
through lines and cords,
and bytes and ram,
I imagine
your voice,
whispering into my ear?
Have I ever told you
that I wait out each day
in anticipation,
wanting
only an hour or two,
just a second in space and time,
to feel close to you?
Have I ever told you
that there has been times,
when I ached for you,
ached for you so badly,
that the emotions overwhelmed me..
and so I sat and cried?
Have I ever told you
that sometimes,
I will reach out,
touching your name
on this cold screen before me,
wishing
I could reach in
and pull you to me?
Have I ever told you
that after the first time I heard
the sound of your voice,
thousands of miles away,
I sat up all night,
turning the conversation over and over
in my mind,
examining it,
like some newly discovered species of flower?
Have I ever told you
that I would give everything up,
just for one night
to be able to lay near you,
to feel your chest rise and fall
with each breath you take,
just to know that you are real?
Have I ever told you
that I dream of you often,
I dream of you reaching out
and touching my hand,
simply to let me know
that you are there,
and everything is okay?
Have I ever told you,
have I still yet to tell you . . .
that I love you?
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Posted by missmarie on 2008-05-21 13:01:00 | Rating: | Views: 142
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this is very sweet.
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Posted by yalith777
on 2008-05-21 13:20:07
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Just beautiful. As someone who has experienced love via a computer screen I can relate to all the feelings and emotions the author is feeling. Thanks for much for sharing this. Peace.
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Posted by ColoradoDreamin
on 2008-05-21 16:47:31
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oh wow... that is a great post ... thank you for sharing it with us all.
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Posted by EasyToSay
on 2008-05-22 01:13:22
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This sounds like something you might write, Marie.
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Posted by Pauligan
on 2008-05-23 07:45:42
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I thoroughly enjoyed this poem..Loving your new profile pic. too....
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Posted by Hollis
on 2008-05-23 21:07:49
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I wish i knew the author, when i first read it i was convinced it was someone on thoughts, and yes i have already searched the name ha ha
it is lovely, i think at some point we may have all had similar experiences and feeling xx
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Posted by missmarie
on 2008-05-24 08:28:52
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I think that communication with friends via the internet can be quite profound and so much more sensitive for not having the visual indicators by which we all unwittingly assess each other.
You can go straight to a person's heart, maybe even their soul level on the internet way before the outer shell is reached, by which time the judgement phase has already passed by.
Thank you for this missmarie, it's very touching. xxx
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Posted by Merlyn
on 2008-05-27 14:56:34
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