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 You tell me the title of this post!!!!!!!!
Is it only me who seems to be lagging behind on this "Erotic" writing?
I am not much of a writer , nowhere near as good as a lot of the writings i see here on thoughts.
I think a lot of you very talented writers are secretely well known authors, if not then you should be.
I am going to have a go at this writing, forgive me if i let the side down.
I have no title so i would welcome any ideas.
Here goes.

Still out of breathe, she kept running, not knowing where she was heading. The sun was going down and soon it would only be the moonlight to show her the way.  The way to where? She had no idea where she was going, she only knew that she had to get away. Get away from all that she loved, her home , her children and even her husband.
Yes, her husband, she loved him with all her heart, everyone knew how much they belonged together.  They had been childhood sweethearts and she had known no other man.
They had their ups and downs, but doesn't every loving couple?
The problem right now was with her imagination, imagining being with someone else. Someone who could really make her feel truly satisfied. She suddenly had needs that she had never had before, needs that her husband could not satisfy. She had no idea why these needs suddenly jumped into her. Maybe they have always been there, just lying under the surface.
She sat down in the cool grass in the meadow she found herself in, where do i go from here?
In the distance she saw a barn, the clouds were drawing in and it was a safe bet that it would start to rain. She stood herself up and headed for the barn. There was no-one around so she went inside. She curled up in the hay that was piled up in the corner. Thinking she would rest a while until the rain passed over.
She closed her eyes and slowly drifted off into a light slumber.
A noise jolted her awake, she sat upright to see a dark shadow standing before her. For some reason she was not afraid, very strange because normally she was afraid of strangers in the dark.
SSSHHHH! A voice said. She did not utter a word, her breathing became more fuller and her heart began to race. There was a stroke on her cheek from some tender fingers. The hand moved to the back of her head and she felt the breath of another on her face. Suddenly, some soft warm lips were on hers and she was floating away. Floating to who knows where but she did not want to stop. She could feel her whole body trembling, shivering while in the throws of passion she was feeling. Is this for real? She didn't care, it felt so damm good. A hand slipped up her camisole and under the satin and lace turqoise bra she was wearing, she lifted a hand to touch the face of this "Dark Shaddow", but before she could reach another hand firmly gripped her wrist and lowered it to the side of her body.
"Why can i not touch you?" She whispered as she pulled away from the soft kisses.
There was no answer just silence.
As the tender hand moved down to the waistband of her figure hugging jeans, the sensation in her groin became overwhelming. She let her legs fall apart to make room for the hand to tease her pulsating womanhood.
Suddenly there was a bang and she jolted upright , realising that the bang was thunder and she had been dreaming the whole time.
Why can she not get these thoughts out of her head? 


Now i do realise that this is not exactly "erotic" but i told you i was not thatgood of a writer.
 
 
    Posted by misselusive on 2008-06-24 11:48:18 | Rating: | Views: 209
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Interesting...satisfaction comes with a hard road.
I returned to my childhood sweetheart, and it can be the sweetest thing, if we have the right mind set.
Love is losing ourselves completely in another person.
Fantasies, can be swept out, if given the sweep.
I love you.
Posted by  DifficultSoul  on 2008-06-24 14:15:13 
  
This is really good, sometimes leaving it to the imagination is the most erotic thing you can do.
You are a good writer honey, i hope you do more.
Love ya mwahhh xxx
Posted by  missmarie  on 2008-06-25 06:11:37 
  
What about, "S"-"H" (ess aytch)?
Posted by  WUNDERING  on 2008-06-25 06:42:48 
  
Great post doll. the imagination... sometimes it would be safer to love the real thing, then some of the things I can imagine
Posted by  tonyrayhutchison  on 2008-06-25 10:44:04 
  
Dont put yourself down as a writer, there's plenty out there to do that job. :p lol

The fact you took the time and had the courage to share this with us at all, shows you ARE a writer and writing is a craft which we get better at as we practise.

This is a great post that conjures up visions in the mind and since the subject is 'love', erotic or not, how could it be bad? :)

Excellent work misselusive! Looking forward to reading more.
Posted by  scotslad60  on 2008-06-25 11:44:42 
  
How about "A Welcome Fantasy"? Good stuff Lovely elusive, it had me going. xx
Posted by  Pauligan  on 2008-06-25 11:58:15 
  
Excellent, let the steamy words return to thoughts again!! :)

Enjoyed reading this .. more to come??? :)
Posted by  EasyToSay  on 2008-06-25 19:58:56 
  
This was fantastic honey! You have a real talent. keep writing :D
xx tantric xx
Posted by  tantrictouch  on 2008-06-26 07:05:05 
  
This is really very good. You are a writer. Because writing, is just using your imagination and writing. Please write more. I would love to see you continue this story. What about the title "Dark Shadow?"

Please let's hear more. You have a talent that should be used.
Posted by  Emmy  on 2008-07-01 19:45:31 
  
This is good. I was thinking for a title "Out of Breath" since she was that way twice and if you keep working it, many more times. "Dark Shadow" is cool to.
Posted by  Faith  on 2008-07-01 20:06:28 
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