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Hello i have some poetry for you if you like it you can buy my books on Amazon.com PURE and TWO under my name Marc Carver


ADVENTURE LAND


I sit on a bench
with the sun on my face
people pass
pointing at different things
and talking.
I hear women scream

I hear chains that pull people to heights
that they will soon fall from.

I look down
and see the chewing gum on my shoe
that I put there - three days ago.

Maybe they are right about me
the only trouble is,
you can only believe people,
when,
they have nothing
to gain.
    Posted by marc230601 on 2009-09-08 13:14:09 | Rating: | Views: 12
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Wow, I like the "Maybe they are right about me
the only trouble is,
you can only believe people,
when,
they have nothing
to gain." part. It's so true.
Posted by  Mendacious  on 2009-09-08 13:16:29 
  
Thank you very much for your reply. My poetry is what it is i cannot excuse or condone it but the truth it is. The words are what they are and i do not question them but i will leave you another
Posted by  marc230601  on 2009-09-08 16:52:58 
  
mendacious is such a lovely word
Posted by  marc230601  on 2009-09-08 16:57:28 
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