I like it...it's lovely. I always like going back and reading things I've written year ago..it's kind of like a mark on the wall where we can measure our growth...

HI Lyn...
yes, truly does fit, even now!
:)

Yep, I love it. One of those tiny gems that glitter as brightly as any in a ray of sunlight because of the power of what it reflects and refracts.
Cheers
D

This was really simple - but completely beautiful "his jack-o lantern breath"
and than old man winter with his coldness.

You have a way about you...

*BRAVO, BRAVO!* Standing Ovation!


E

Well phrased and brief two very good qualities in most poetry.
I either publish it or toss it, so there's not much of my stuff for me to put up.
Shame, I was good at begging for sex in a very literary way,not lacking tallent with euphamisms. Well it was a good read so I guess I'll have to remember you.

so enjoyed reading your poem "He" Lyn, such perfect word imagery I was transported!
especially today, when our city's temperature nudged 39degs C (nearly 100degs F)and it's still only spring!

Did you fall for him?

I truly enjoyed that, lyn. I'll stand and applaud with E!

Stop that! You'll start me liking poetry.

Wonderful - if this is early work, you started high and then went climbing.

OMG! OMG! This is simply tremendous... I love reading you so much. I really do.