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The Untold Story!
I am a mess of eyeliner and contradictions
who's thought's and mantras are interupted by prayers and wishes to be thin.

I am the girl on the street who people pass with no inkling, no idea and with no regreat of her troubled life, but look into her eyes and it's there.
The untold story wanting to be read, the abandoned book left on the shelf.
She is the throw away eggshell with no life inside, the clock on the wall wishing away it's time.

The street's are filled with perfection, and she is inelegant.
Men, women walk past this disgusting ugliness this failure and disaster.

Her lips do not move but yet she pleads, talk's, screams.
No tears fall from her eyes, but yet she crys inside for that something which has died, and like fire she destroys herself burning until she is all burnt out, burning on a need to know now.
She is blind, yet her eyes can see only the pain and suffering her selfishness causes others.

I am on a dance floor and no one will dance with me,
for I am the piece of glass left on the beach.
Posted by lonelyscribe on 2008-03-23 08:05:03 | Rating: | Views: 114


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Posted by
OKOFCOURSE
on 2008-03-30 06:49:01
 
LONELY SCRIBE,

That was some really great imagery but the grief I felt as I read it conceals some of the true beauty of your poem.

J
 
 

Posted by
whatonlyisee
on 2008-07-07 19:54:33
 
ur deep ur troubles have earned u at least that much and u have a way with words u cant be that bad off when ur able to wright and express yourself in such ways no one that is good with a pen or in this case a keyboard is ever that bad off
it takes an eccentric mind to wright the way u do and many otheres do i dont mean to offend with the eccentric thing lol
just think that if ur good with words u will never really be at lost
talk to me if it means something i would licen thats as good as i can do for u i dont care if ur hart has turned stone hard and u lost the ability to love ( this is in regards to ur last post my overwhelming thoughts)
like i said the best i can do
 
 


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