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Hert and Broken
By,
Corinne Butler
written: 8/27/07
A shattered beathing heart
lays in an empty soled body.
You say is there something wrong
and all i can say is hert and broken.
Tears foll down my face like ruby
red blood drops from and open wound.
You try to give a comforting smile and
hug but you just fall right through me.
You look at me and say why, and all
i can say is hert and broken.
leave some comments and tell me that you think of my poem
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Posted by live2hate_learn2love on 2007-08-29 17:38:33 | Rating: | Views: 81
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I think people would appreciate your poem much more if you spell checked it...otherwise it has a twist to it, which is nice...it tells of a man who covers up his mess but is caught without ever saying it. Nice work.
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Posted by heizo
on 2007-08-30 11:55:18
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