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this is my second try at poetry, please leave comments and tell me wat u think...
what is this hurt
tht i feel inside
why does depression consume me,
even with the mention
of his name
wat is it about him
tht makes him
so hard to forget
i think to myself
if i didnt love him
like i said i did
why cant i forget him
now when its been
so long since we've
been a couple
y do i long to feel
his touch, his kiss
y do i long to smell
his cologne
tht smelt o so good
y do i always have
the feeling of longing
to see him, hear his voice
to even talk to him
in general when he
hurt me like he did
hes moved on,
so y cant i?
y is it so hard for me
to say i dont need him ne more?
or to say im over him?
but i no 1 thing i can say
im probably never
going 2 stop wanting him.....
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Posted by lalissa1128 on 2008-07-13 17:47:49 | Rating: | Views: 81
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Hi, First time reader of your blogs... and I have to say I am impressed with your poetry.
Thank you for sharing, such beautiful words and verse.
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Posted by EasyToSay
on 2008-07-13 18:14:14
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good shit.
advice? all i got to say is the wounds will heal with time.
shows how much i suck at advice.
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Posted by xmidnightxwingsx
on 2008-07-14 01:21:16
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thanks so much guys...
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Posted by lalissa1128
on 2008-07-14 20:45:36
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