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 over the edge
take the knife,
and jab it in deep
for tonight is the night
you will regret leaving me

you told me,
you'd never leave me
always be there for me
but were are you now?

when you left my world
fell apart
baby why did you leave?
why did you go?

was it something i said?
was it something i did?
well hear my last plea
baby come back to me!?

and dont leave me again
i know i messed up
and made mistakes
but please, just save me
one last time
from myself,

dont make me go
down the path im
already going down
any further

dont let me go to the beyond
were i'll be death bound
forever
baby please come take
the knife way from me

so i can heal and
have the scars
to remind myself,
how close i was
to ending it all

please try and forgive me
because you were my world
your my light
if not for you
i would be in forever darkness

dont move on
from me just yet
one more chance
is all i need
to prove myself
faithful to you

but your not going
to come back
because you have moved on
so my world beneath my feet
crumbles

and i take the last step
toward the edge
your killing me softly
and gentle
now you have to
watch me fade
for tonight is the night
that the blood will run
and not be stopped
for is the tonight
is the night
i will take my last breath....


k peoples i want all of you comments on this 1... weither there bad or good....
i need to no if im any good at writing poetry......
    Posted by lalissa1128 on 2008-07-16 14:22:22 | Rating: | Views: 68
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Keep breathing hunni.
Posted by  FutileResistance  on 2008-07-17 03:52:31 
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