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 Closure

The rose upon my chest,
Took a dive downtrodden earth.
At a reception for new married.
A new couple God gave birth
Of golden,glistening wedding bands.
As I glided from the dance floor.
Without anyone hand in hand.
I lost my breathe in fleeted gasps.
My heart hammered in flutter..
And I lost all of my selfworth...
Finality...
Closed door.
My loss of you to another.
My eyes flooded with sheepish tears.
As you bid hello.
Never thinking that you'd acknowledge me.
In your presence I'd bestowed.
And I wanted to forget you.
Past thoughts that made me ill.
Of pain and joy and things mixed between.
In the end no magic pill.
I had really thought that time would heal...
That I'd have forgotten what once had been.
And the pain and cuts of losing you,
The wounds would finally congeal.
And I'd dance the tune of love again.
At you sat there with your family,
And with a man I dreamed was I.
And where the best man came in second best.
I realised and finally reconciled....
That life truly had passed me by.
 
copyright. asc. 1988.
    Posted by kentlass on 2007-10-24 07:17:46 | Rating: | Views: 398
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That is beautiful! Love it.
Stay Safe.

J
Posted by  Rainbow  on 2007-10-24 07:53:55 
  
thanks for your warm welcome. I hope my nursing degree goes fast, i cant wait 2 get out there and help people! Your poem was truely moving! I hope you visit my blog again and mayb give me advise on my posts! take care xx
Posted by  Jenns  on 2007-10-24 08:01:31 
  
Lovely words and a great poem as always. Keep writing them :)

Namaste
Posted by  scotslad60  on 2007-10-24 08:27:43 
  
gorgeous!
Posted by  lilhenry54  on 2007-10-24 17:32:53 
  
That's beautiful a.c.! I so admire writers who can make a thing of such beauty seem so effortless! Peace
Posted by  rogintheUP  on 2007-10-25 01:43:52 
  
Beautiful
Posted by  Whitters  on 2007-10-25 05:49:38 
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