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 Elite Magic (a story in progress)
Captain Aradus ran hard down the dark hall, his blood stained sword dripped with the green blood of trolls as he ran. The once mighty leader, now the last of his unit.
An ambush at the heart of the dark castle had taken care of his men. The plan was simple, invade the Dark castle and take out Selphinus, the most powerful and evil sorcerer of all time. The attack had gone well, there were many trolls and creatures created from the mind of Selphinus but nothing like what they saw at the centre of that damned castle. The real army had lay in wait, with a ferocious monster that could wipe out his whole unit.

The screams of his dying men still echoed in his mind as he ran. Sweat poured down his face as he fought to outrun his enemies, he could hear the growls of the monstrous beast echoing down the hall, getting closer and closer to the fleeing human.Aradus didn't dare to look behind him, he knew the enemy was close, he could feel the ground pound with every step the beast took.
The hall seemed to go forever and Aradus  could feel his legs slowly turning to jelly, soon he would join his fallen comrades, defeated at the hands of Selphinus pet.
Finally, light broke through the darkness. Aradus couldn't believe his luck, he was going to make it, with the last of his energy he sprinted for the  yawning doorway. The warm sunshine caressed his face as he took his first step toward  freedom, he could see the barren wasteland strech out before him and a flash of green streak past his preipheral vision. The mighty soldier turned to see a giant green tentacle stretching out of the dark cavernous hallway. He tried to run, to turn, to fight with his blood staned sword ---- it was no use, before he could process a thought, the tentacle shot around in a sweeping arc and speared straight through the iron armour of the exhausted human. The captain tried to scream, but no scream came as he was dragged at phenomenal speed into the cold inky darkness of the most powerful sorcerer's lair.

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A lone falcon soared high over the sapphire blue sea, trailing the majestic sailing ship Amerysta, as it made its way towards the beautiful coastal village of Caleoni.
    Posted by kenshin on 2008-06-10 23:34:24 | Rating: | Views: 34
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Thats a cool story u got there! I hope u contine to post more
Posted by  Leonard7  on 2008-06-12 08:04:08 
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