Posted by
Hollis
on 2008-02-26 00:43:41 |
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What a great poem..Trevorjohn will be so happy to know that you were thinking of her as you wrote this..
Yes tempations are out there so strong for our young,but we need to keep reminding them of the effects it will have on their future and all relationships they will ever have.
Bless you for writing about this.
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Posted by
ColoradoDreamin
on 2008-02-26 02:42:18 |
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This was amazingly beautiful.
What a beautiful gift that I'm sure Trevorjohn will want to give to her son. Thanks for writing and sharing these hopeful, encouraging words. You need to see about getting your work published. The world needs to see the words that come from your heart. Peace. |
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Posted by
risingmoonfart
on 2008-02-26 10:45:27 |
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| great poem! I think that drugs are a temptation and hopefully with good teaching and will your trevor will see. Im sorry that this has caused you pain though . It sounds like you have really have been afflicted by whats happened but people can change and i hope trevor does. |
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Posted by
trevorjohn
on 2008-02-26 10:46:23 |
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sniff sniff!!!Thank you so much for that poem, it really means alot to me.
Colorado is right, I am going to give this to Trevor and my other Son Ryan as well.
Once again it amazes me the strength and hope I get from my friends on thoughts.
You are a beautiful person that always seems to be there for me.
I wish you love my Dear friend. |
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Posted by
trevorjohn
on 2008-02-26 10:53:02 |
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Keepdreaming I had to come back again and say WOW!!! My heart is swelling.
I was in the card shop looking for a special card for my Son and I just couldn't find anything that really jumped out at me, well this certainly did, so I'm gonna make a card for him!
That's when it hit me, maybe you should use your talents on writing cards. Cards about real life stuff, cards about the stuff people on this site are going thru.
Peace my friend |
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Posted by
keepdreaming
on 2008-02-26 22:57:41 |
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| Hollis, thank you, you are right!! What I keep reminding my kids is that, they are only young such a short time, but the choices they make during those brief years could effect their entire lifetime. So I urge them to come to me with questions and concerns, and NEVER make a choice they are not comfortable making. God Bless! |
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Posted by
keepdreaming
on 2008-02-26 23:02:54 |
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| Colorado, you always leave the sweetest comments! I wish I could shrink you and keep you in my purse...that way I'd always have a special, kind person to talk to anytime I'd want. (although you might have an entire new opinion of me if you'd see the inside of MY purse...it's a disaster :) People like you are very rare. Thank You Sweetie! |
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Posted by
keepdreaming
on 2008-02-26 23:21:46 |
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| risingmoonfart, thank you for complimenting the poem, that was very sweet. The poem was written for another Mother here on Thoughts, whos son is struggling through a very difficult time. Although Trevor is not my son, he very well could be,(in the sense that any of our children could be going through something like this) so I am able to empathize greatly with Trevorjohn. Let all keep her and her son in our prayers as they go through this. God Bless! |
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Posted by
keepdreaming
on 2008-02-26 23:41:03 |
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TrevorJohn...Now those "Sniff Sniffs" Better not have meant you smelt something stinky???? LIKE THAT POEM??? hee-hee. I'm teasing you!
You are Very Welcome for that...it's from one mother to another. I can't say I know what you are going through, but I can say I do feel your pain, at least some of it. I feel it by the things you have posted, and by just getting to know you through Thoughts. It's almost like we were sisters in a former life. I've never met you, but I feel an unusual connection to you. Something inside me wants to help you. I can't explain it, and I don't understand it.
About your greeting card idea...that is funny you mentioned that...I've been told by my sisters several times to do that. But I just can't "Sell" my poetry. It's to much a part of me. I have sold many other forms of my art, but never my poetry. It comes from my heart and is given with a lot of love, I'd never put a price tag on it, nor could I ever profit from someones else's heartaches. But you are so sweet to be thinking of ways for me to use my talents...keep think'in...I need all the help I can get! God Bless Sweetie! |
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Posted by
overthehillandfaraway
on 2008-02-27 06:24:06 |
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| You see TrevorJohn - God continues to place angels in your path! You deserve it - what a beautiful poem. Elaine |
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Posted by
mcostilla2010
on 2008-02-27 09:30:26 |
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| This was a really great poem!!! I am a teenager myself and it is the parent who has to get in control so they cna avoid teenage sex, drugs, and alchol. |
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Posted by
keepdreaming
on 2008-02-27 16:37:47 |
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| overthehillandfaraway, your comment is beautiful and humbles me, but if the "angel in her path" you are referring to is me, I am by no means anyone's angel, I'm just a mother, who is able to put myself in others shoes. I'm a girl who has loved and lost in more than one way, and knows the true meaning of a broken heart. If I could I would erase all pain from this earth. God Bless! |
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Posted by
keepdreaming
on 2008-02-27 16:42:38 |
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mcostilla2010,
Thank you so much for your comment! I love hearing from a teenager. Your opinion is VERY important to me. I will take your advice and get in control. Please feel free to advise me on any other topics teenagers are discussing these days. I can always use your input! God Bless! |
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Posted by
overthehillandfaraway
on 2008-02-27 17:20:20 |
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| You're not 'just a mother', you're a great mother who is using her own experiences to help others. Broken hearts heal, once you learn to forgive. It doesn't mean you have to forget. I think you are doing a wonderful job. Elaine |
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Posted by
keepdreaming
on 2008-02-27 22:02:00 |
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You are very kind and sweet overthehillandfaraway!! Not all broken hearts are due to someone doing something to us, that would qualify them the need our forgiveness. Some broken hearts are deeper than a relationship gone bad. For me the big one was the loss of my Mother as a young girl. It taught me that no one is exempt from a broken heart, and no matter how great we love, it can be taken from us in a blink of an eye, so we better never take it for granted. We need to teach our young kids to make the very best of their lives...and we need to be shining examples for them. Thank you Elaine for your sweet words.
God Bless You!! |
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Posted by
overthehillandfaraway
on 2008-02-28 04:40:27 |
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| Sorry Keepdreaming, it was wrong of me to assume things. I do totally understand your hurt. I work as a team member in the Ministry of Divine Healing so I see a lot of broken hearts which only forgiveness can heal. Losing a mother so young is a hurt you carry all your life but it appears to me she left behind a wonderful daughter. It's wonderful that you bring your kids up that way and very encouraging for others. God bless, Elaine |
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Posted by
keepdreaming
on 2008-02-28 09:34:07 |
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| Well Now that too explains why you are suck a kind and wonderful lady overthehillandfaraway!!! You'd have to be an extremely compassionate person to work in a field like that and still maintain your beautiful outlook on life. I admire you! God Bless!! |
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Posted by
DifficultSoul
on 2008-02-28 12:49:34 |
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What a thoughtful post.
You are such a dear friend.
It made me all teary eyed.
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Posted by
brainstormer
on 2008-03-07 00:47:58 |
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| Yawns...late at night...not feeling my best...shouldnt even be here....hmm? Suck a kind and wonderful woman? hehe:P Sorry...teehee. Yea, not too shabby, KD. |
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Posted by
foxx_flie
on 2008-03-11 16:39:43 |
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Posted by
keepdreaming
on 2008-03-12 02:17:40 |
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Thank you DS,
It just tugs at my heart to think what Trevorjohn and her son went through, and are still going through. He's just a young boy with his entire future waiting for him. Kids don't realize how fast their youth passes them by, and their adulthood lasts the rest of their lives. Those few vulnerable years make such a difference.
God Bless! |
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Posted by
keepdreaming
on 2008-03-12 02:19:42 |
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Well coming from you Brainstormer, I'm taking THAT as a compliment! So Thank YOU kind Sir!" Now go get some rest!
God Bless! |
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Posted by
keepdreaming
on 2008-03-12 02:21:57 |
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Foxx_flie,
Hi Girl! You are so sweet. I'll keep a nice warm fuzzy sporty jacket handy just for when you pop in, Okay? You seem like a sporty sort of girl. ;).
Thanks for your sweet comment!
God Bless! |
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