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 Please Don't Leave Me (A poem)

i called out your name, in the past and distant night, things weren't feeling the same, nothing i felt was right
patience wasn't ever my strong suit, i couldn't see the big picture there, you were like forbidden fruit, something so precious and rare
i picked up on the lines, the ones you were feeding me, if only i could've seen the signs, but still i'm not free
i love everything about you, but the words you said before, now everything i do, is haunted by what i gave up my heart for
yes everything changed, but i feel like we can get it back, please don't leave me, i'd rather be hanged, for some crime than to go to the darkest black
the void i feel without you around, is there still in my mind, my feet hold me to the ground, but you by my side is what i need to always find

    Posted by karikaiba on 2009-10-30 12:26:57 | Rating: | Views: 66
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That is amazing. I loved every single line of it.

Great work,
*Miss Nightmare*
Posted by  MissNightmare  on 2009-10-30 12:34:19 
  
Thanks *Miss Nightmare*. I'll read yours now.
Posted by  karikaiba  on 2009-10-30 12:41:06 
  
I loved it!! I always feel like I could be feeling what you are saying in
alot of your poetry.
This was awesome.
Thank you for posting.

...dani
Posted by  WalkinOnSunshine  on 2009-10-30 12:42:45 
  
Your welcome. I thank you both for reading. Just trying to keep up with my poetry.
Posted by  karikaiba  on 2009-10-30 13:22:28 
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