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 A Lessoned Learned
My heart was seriously shattered, but to you that never mattered. I gave every right away to you, but couldn't foresee all the evil you would do. Hating you was easy for me, because after awhile you couldn't make me happy. I got caught up in your vicious storm, the one where I wasn't forewarned. My mind got made up real quick, because all of your words made me sick. What you became, I despised, and I avoided all of your suffocating lies. My heart was tormented by what we became, and to think I considered taking your last name. Right now if we were in the same room, I'd leave you the same as what you gave me: impending doom. So suffice to say I left you, as anyone normal would do. I gave you what I had: my heart, now, we can't go back to the start.
    Posted by karikaiba on 2009-10-26 13:18:17 | Rating: | Views: 18
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i love the simplicity of this poem. it's straight to the point and well versed. keep em' coming!
Posted by  be1th  on 2009-10-28 00:41:59 
  
I will, thanks for the encouragement.
Posted by  karikaiba  on 2009-10-28 09:29:28 
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