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| Posted in
blanko on 2008-07-30 23:22:58 |
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Nothing to say really... It's a wonderful poem.
"Clicked my heels together and realized
I was where I wanted to be all along."
==> love that line.
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| Posted in
Hey Look Its My Soul: Part 6 on 2008-07-30 05:13:37 |
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The person described in this is the type of self-depricating masochist to describe themselves that way. ==> Huh?!
The poem just reminds me of a young dreamer waiting for love and messing up while he/she is at it.
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| Posted in
Hey Look Its My Soul: Part 5 on 2008-07-30 05:07:35 |
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I actually agree with brainstormer. I think it's because your first section is very structured... You have a pattern going.
And come the second section, it just kind of got a bit... uhm, scattered...
And after you left, the smiles that were too strong to suppress,
Too unruly to control....
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| Posted in
Hey Look Its My Soul: Part 4 on 2008-07-30 05:00:57 |
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Shouldn't the first question start with either "Who" or "What"? *shrugs*
Anyway, if I were to say this poem, the one I would be talking to would be God. "What are we in your eyes?"
It makes sense that way... ^_^
Anyway, it's good. I like it.
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| Posted in
Hey Look Its My Soul: Part 3 on 2008-07-30 04:50:12 |
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It's too long for me to even start reading.
I tried reading the first paragraph but since I have no idea who in heaven's name either Kurtz or Conrad is, I lost interest.
I don't even know if the whole thing even has a point. Or is the whole point being "Colonization is the horror!" which...
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| Posted in
Hey Look Its My Soul: Part 2 on 2008-07-30 04:45:18 |
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First of all, just a technicality... I wish you could've separated your paragraphs with a space just like your comment. It would've made your blog more readable.
Now, that being said, your blog simply just reminds me of Ecclesiastes and the futility of life. How life seems aimless - like a...
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| Posted in
Hey Look Its My Soul: Part 1 on 2008-07-30 04:39:36 |
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