
Posted by
mrbsoccer05
on 2007-07-28 00:10:41 |
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| i kinda like that one... i'm not sure if it relates to love but i wrote a weird one like that today... it said.... at times i don't even want to breathe cuz every second i'm breathing means that i've gone another second without you and there is no point to breathing if you aren't there.... |
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Posted by
jlindsaysmith39
on 2007-10-23 01:03:11 |
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| Your poem is about love. I think what I wrote was in jest & probably more about lust. Sometimes lust can to turn to love, sometimes things don't go anywhere as happened in this case, we were just ships passing in the night. |
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