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THE STRUGGLE
I try not to fall away
Its a struggle i have everyday
the life i lead
is the life i want
the deeper i go
the worse it gets
the help i need
i say it will never come
but im glad i was wrong
as i fall to the ground
you help me turn around
i get up
with your hand
i slowly get stronger
your word helping me along
not falling any longers
i now stand strong
fighting to serve you
with your help i remain
ready to live for you
Posted by jessicahgist on 2008-04-21 17:51:59 | Rating: | Views: 180


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Posted by
Spook
on 2008-04-21 19:41:20
 
Great poem. Very encouraging for those losing hope.
 
 

Posted by
jessicahgist
on 2008-04-21 20:48:38
 
thanks not very good at writing them but i like doing it anyways
 
 

Posted by
Aphrodite
on 2008-04-22 13:41:41
 
Really nice poem - but not everyone is fortunate enough to get that helping hand. I don't know how this poem can uplift their hope though.
 
 

Posted by
jessicahgist
on 2008-04-23 09:59:51
 
i think your wrong. you might not see the help you are getting. it could even through friends, bad things could happen to where you learn somthing you might not normally learn. in this poem im talking about God coming to pick me up again when i fall down. (SIN) and i do that a lot but every time i do. every... God always turns me around to follow him.which i am very thankful for
 
 


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