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 love no more

From a mind so carefully constructed
To a song so lovingly composed

From a heart so hurtfully destructed
Is a girl that nobody knows

She thought she had it all when they spent hours on the phone
She thought their love would never end
He was everything she needed when she felt small and all alone
He became her new best friend
Their relationship grew stronger and moved towards a thing called love
And soon the pair had made their feelings clear
They were a perfect match and fit each other like a glove
They smiled as they held the other near
Little did they know that this would all soon fall apart
Their togetherness would soon become a joke
Their love became unraveled, nothing like it was at the start
They’d lost the plot and now they barely spoke
He was always forgetting her and spending time with other girls
Not making any effort to see her smile
She just blamed herself and felt like dirt compared to pearls
Wondering if her life was worthwhile

From a love so thoughtfully connected
To a hate so decisively defined
From a soul so wrongfully rejected
Is a life that is now confined

She took the hurt and turned it into anger, doubt and hate
She turned her back on all that made her glad
Her life became a sin and she didn’t care about her fate
She felt empty inside, alone and very sad
He had no idea he’d done her wrong and made her life a mess
He knew she’d changed but didn’t ask her why
He wondered why it seemed they loved each other less and less
But didn’t stop to ask what made her cry
She felt so neglected but decided not to tell him this
She thought that he would want to let her go
Her biggest mistake was to cover all her doubt with just a simple kiss
To hide it all and never let him know
So the relationship was over nearly the same way it begun
From little chats to feelings from the heart
They started far apart then came in close and joined as one
And from being close they slowly drifted apart

From a boy so genuinely trusted
To a lie so spitefully imposed
From courage so sparingly mustered
Is a story that’s now been exposed

    Posted by jamieson on 2007-10-10 22:17:19 | Rating: | Views: 107
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aaaahhhhhhhh when did u write this? it made me cry!
im sorry if this happened to you.
i just want to cuddle you and permanently destroy anyone that did this to you.

are you ok?

your fantastic. please be ok. ily heaps
Posted by  shell47  on 2007-10-11 23:37:18 
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