" If not...then maybe we should just live in....
live in..what we're suppose to leave behind.. "
nice

thank you :-)

So rich in depths only ones soul can justly measure. Escaping reality and dancing with your thoughts. BTW, I am here. X

such is life..in our eyes...

PS: someone's got a lovely back..(hehe)

Sometimes the end of a station can be the start of a new journey, as long as we don't forget to take a rest in between, sometimes the fast train seems a distant dream as long as you keep your focus on that :)

The song is amazing - powerful lyrics : a lead role in a cage, makes me think if time just passes by without realising what we trully have.

Love your thoughts, and your version of the song :)

im just glad you liked it!

I'll be joining you there, meet me in the train which goes to Montauk... beautiful, thank you..

Montauk..sounds good!


PS: tell me im Joel and you're clementine

*hehe*

Not your best - but then your best is brilliant - with much respect puck

thank you puck :-)

~ awesome song...moonie...i never read your posts...i experience them...what an intense ride ~ ps. you rock ;) ~

nothing like a frenchkiss!

PS: hehe

you're my lovely reader frenchie!

Ok, maybe it's just me...but this really reached me...really said a lot to me...I understand where you go...I know about those journeys between heaven and hell...my favorite line was,
"like a gift well wrapped with misery....
tripped up by self indulging......"
As I read this, I wanted more and more to hear you read it...like def poetry...that would have been awesome!!! Have you ever tried it? Man, this one would be perfect...

Thank you for sharing that...I loved it...five stars and bookmarking...Now, don't leave me the standard comment about a comment....this was too profoundly wonderful...(you can say nothing at all, if you wish).

Joanne..you pretty much decoded it..

PS: i like it when someone "hears" me

OH!!! I forgot to say, you did a really nice job on the song...not sure if there are Pink Floyd fans??? You're kidding, right? hahaha..loves ya, Moon Man!

I've noticed..we share a liking for quality music!

Im here im here!
wouldnt want to be anywhere else than surrounded by your words Moonie.

~sigh~

PS: (glad you're here)

hehe

You words though simple, have the power to move mountains by the sheer force of their intensity.

Someone once told me to smile more. When I asked why her reply was " A lot of people out there are extremely lonely and all they want is a little recognition, someone to smile to give them the strength to survive one more day. A smile costs nothing but has the potential to save the life of someone you don't even know".


to save me the wasted, save me from myself
i lie just to be real, and i'd die just to feel
why do the same old things keep on happening?
because beyond my hopes there are no feelings
everybody's lost just waiting to be found
everyone's a thought just waiting to fade

Smashing Pumpkins - Tales of a scorched Earth

P.S. the song is incredible!

that is so well said...

PS: im glad you read me

cheers

I am a Pink Floyd groupie. With that expertise may I say that your rendition of this song is soulfully poignant and the best interpretation, in my opinion, you have done to date. I believe that if we humans were honest with each other and ourselves we would fess up that we are all lonely. Star Trek, Borg's Seven of Nine said it best when she said to the Star Trek humans, "How can you stand this loneliness?".

Greunie..you simply get me..


PS: I often get lost when i listen to songs by Pink Floyd..
for i know not everyone could have written and sung
the songs like they did...

You touched my heart as usual...I wish I could give you hugs right now to help with all this...I know of lonliness and pain and being surrounded by crowds of people with not a one to really look at me and know me...I just want one pair of eyes to 'see' me...Just one...:)

we're sailing in the same boat..aren't we?


PS: be rest assured my pairs are always on you..

~hehe~

I think so...
and mine are on you too... *smiles*

hehe..now you're talking!

You make me smile...seriously!!! :)

and that smile is..one of the few things...that keep me alive...

Moonie..You always know what to say...:)

hi i kno its been awhile but i am back :]

so yah i guess if you hav read my recent blog and the about me on my profile u wuld understand why i am saying.....so u saw me at the train "the thin girls who dine on a lettuce leaf and water" i am one of them
and "the teenager with self harm as a hobby" thats me too

so this part hit me "i met a beautiful stranger in the train today..
she was really strange...she initiated a conversation..
i wondered if it made any sense...but as she spoke..
i realised she's the only thing that makes sense to me..
she had the words...that saved me from falling....
she took some time out of her life to show me a mirror..
the mirror that showed what life is..and im capable of....
she took interest...i never had an idea that I could move a stranger...." it made me cry but in a good way

and this too "so tell me where is the crime...in longing?
where's the guilt in being needy?
where is the pain in feeling lonely?
where's the fun in fading slowly?
a simple gesture from a lovely stranger...
with lines..that brought a storm in my head..
her intentions...to save me from myself....
Words that came out from her lips touched my heart...
a conversation that lasted for the distance that is two stations..
the distances were long..but her charm made them short..." this was just beautiful :]

again moonie you r a beautiful writer

MaRiNa :]

thank you marina :-) you're sweet as ever to be reading me always!


PS: and lets do something about the lettuce leaf...
can't we try peoper food for a while?

~hehe~

one of my personal faves from PF; yummy read.

yes...it happens to be my favorite as well!

PS: thank you for taking time to reading/listening to me!

Good to hear your beautiful voice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WOW

You think so much like myself...You are just lonely and looking at the world does not help, but thank goodness that one comes along to lift your spirits. Love your beautiful heart M.

thank you lana :-)

it's the kind people like you...

that make me feel less lonely...


PS: im glad u timely read me!

Wonderful as always love... If I saw a beautiful boy like you sitting on a train, I would like to think I would be able to strike up a conversation, though honestly I would probably be too shy :)

And kudos for picking one of the only Pink Floyd songs I actually do like heh

You are such a ray of light and love and... I really needed it tonight so... thank you...

do you travel by train?

PS: may be we can co-ordinate, try to journey together
and have out own little story...what say? hehe!

(im glad reading me makes u feel better...
trust me i can do better in person..hehe)

OH! I think I saw you!!!
You must be the guy who kept picking his nose when no one was looking!:o
Jk.:p

This was lovely Sir, and the song.. Nice pick.:)

-Al

yes Alanis..it was indeed me...

PS: And im guessing you were the horny little girl that kept eye raping me?

haha..kidding!..Lovely of you..to be reading/listening to me..cheers

OH MAN YOU CAUGHT ME!:/

But it wasn't you... It was the guy next to you.
You were blocking my view.. I had no choice.. :s

-Al

yes offcourse...apart from me blocking the view...
you were so desperate..that it didn't matter who it was..


PS: you almost gave the whole compartment an orgy

haha!! mind me not...

Im not sure I can tell, diffused are the colors of light and dark as I sit on the grey.

Queen of dark.

Sarafeline.x.

thats so queen of dark!

hehe glad to have you read me again!

Thank you for the song. Touching.

yes indeed a beautiful song..

PS: thank you for listening to me :-)

We're all lonely for something we don't know we're lonely for. How else to explain the curious feeling that goes around feeling like missing somebody we've never even met?

- David Foster Wallace

so true and wo well said...

cheers

What a great piece>accompanied by a great song>and writen by a greater writer!

PS
Love PF

thank you princess :-)

PS: Indeed very kind of you to be reading/listening to me!

Many times we touch people's lives without even knowing it. There have been days where I have been sad, and a simple smile from a stranger who meets my eyes has lightened that mood. They never know what they have done for me, but they have touched part of my life. This happens to everyone.

Wish you were here has always been a favorite song of mine. I have not heard it in a long time. Thank you for helping me to remember it, and the memories that come with it.

true...people do touch lives without any clues at times...

PS: it's one of my favorite song as well!
im glad you took time to read me and listen to my song..

The first half of this is deliciously honest and true. I loved it, it was so realistic and I could picture myself in your shoes for a moment. Not to mention, I'm a sucker for Floyd. Neat idea you have going here and I look forward to "another poem in the blog"
...
That didn't work out as well as I thought :P

pleased to know that you read me!
im quite a sucker for pink floyd as well..
and not sure if these are poems but it's all that i can write..
so yes tune in again..the next write is happening soon...
once again thank you for listening/reading me..keep smiling!

I absolutely love this! Jeez jumper you send a shiver through my spine everytime I read your writing....tee hee.

seems like we're both making each other shiver..hehe

Awesome post. Really intense and absorbing
And great work on the song. One of my favorite Pink Floyd songs
:)

one of my favorites too!

PS: thank you for reading/listening to me..i appriciate that!

That was intense. Our self centered generation is missing out on so many of the simple things in life that can make one so happy.

I've missed ya too, btw. Havent had much to say in a while so I havent been on. Take care!

We sure are missing out on a lot of things....


PS:Glad to hear from you finally...i almost thought...
you might have got yourself busted while doing a drug deal..

hehe..kidding...keep smiling~

Love the song, love your writing. :)

very kind of you to be reading all my posts :-)

PS: thanks!

Individuals are targetted towards the beauty they bring. Elder generation trying to feed off of the beauty of the youth.

well...quite agreeable!

PS: thank you for reading me!

Love your voice! The songs great to. Just started reading your blogs. Thanks for coming by. Later!

very kind of you be reading me :-)

Im glad you liked the singing

keep smiling!

This is amazing...

thank you :-)

On the long list here.. ha.
But, I loved this. Had to fuckin' tell you.
Almost tasted it.

oooh..seems like i have my favorite visitor stopping by...

(hehe)

Wow. You definitely have the way with words! It's a poem in prose... Every word, every sentence tells a lot, falls deep inside my soul...
Well, now I'm going to read all of your blogs! ;)

awww thank you julia you're wonderful!

Wow...didn't think there was anymore room to comment...LOL Great post, I love your observations. You sang the song wonderfully, and I enjoyed it very much ~Hugs~

thank you daisy :-)

Again I step in super late to set you up your well earned 5 stars which aren't nearly what your worthy of. I sit here fixated to your voice and the sweet lyrics that bring life and meaning to a vast empty space that imprisons me late at night or early in the morning, and I realize that even that in itself is a blessing. The emptiness that engulfs this room have taken me by the hand and lead me to your door again. So, do you hear me knocking? I wanted to say hello my long lost friend, it seems I fell away for awhile. I hope to visit alittle more regularly now. Take it easy, and know that I miss chatting with ya.

i am quite late in commenting (bad poppy!) this is wonderful Moonie. I like the song as well.

oh man moonie.. loved this:)
always lovely to read your blogs..
take care hugs pianogirl

Funny how one person can just change everything in a heart beat. To have randomly found someone who could give you what you needed to make it another second in this world surrounded by people who truly just dont give a darn, You were lucky to have found her. ITs funny how when you feel you aare the most alone someone always shows up and almost slaps you in the face giving you a reality chck saying your not alone that you are the exception to this blob of worthless people. That you are what makes them out to shame. That you are going to be in situations where it may be days maybe even weeks were you feel like possable i just dont fit in because you are not like everyone else you see. This women happened to be on your train at the exact same time as you sitting that close to you and changing the way your out look on the world was destiny. she was sent to you because you needed to be reminded that what you say and do does make a difference. That your music and words change the aspect of everyone who hears or reads them. Your words move me and make me read the world around differently. You do Belong. You have a perpose dont forget that.

wow, great post, i like reading you
thanks